An Evening Out

CARL:

Just letting you know that you have chosen a good spot, because I love my privacy.

Carl grabs the Woman by the side of her head and pulls her towards him and he starts kissing her.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

Okay I have to admit that Carl West is a good kisser.

Carl tries to move one of his hands down to the Woman’s breast but she stops him.

WOMAN:

Wait.

The woman pulls away from Carl.

CARL:

Oh, what’s the matter babe? Am I going too fast for you?

WOMAN:

Now, Carl, no man will ever be too fast for me, but I want to give you a surprise before we get to the fun.

CARL:

A surprise, is it something I will like?

WOMAN:

Well, I can guarantee you have never had a surprise like this one.

CARL:

Well, now I’m really curious to find out what this surprise is.

WOMAN:

Okay, well first, I need you to close your eyes.

CARL:

And what are you going to do while my eyes are closed?

WOMAN:

That is part of the surprise. Now close your eyes.

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CLOSE UP of Carl as he closes his eyes and smiles eagerly anticipating what comes next.

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MEDIUM SHOT showing both Carl and the Woman. She starts touching his face, moving her hands over his head almost sensually. Until finally she has one hand on his chin and the other on the back of his head.

CARL:

Okay, my eyes are closed, and you are touching my head. What comes next?

WOMAN:

Now comes your surprise.

The woman gives Carl’s head a sharp twist breaking his neck. (SOUND FX-cracking sound)Carl slumps dead and the woman pushes his corpse away.

WOMAN:

How’s that for a surprise?

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MEDIUM SHOT outside of car as the Woman gets out and stretches.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

Two weeks ago, when I had spotted Carl West at that nightclub feeling up an underaged girl, I knew I would end up killing him. The two weeks I spent watching him only confirmed this fact as I watched him get girl after girl all teenagers drunk and then take advantage of them.

CAMERA follows the Woman as she walks to the trunks of the car.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

Carl is the worst kind of predator using his charm and good looks to lure unsuspecting girls.

The Woman opens the trunk and pulls out a folded-up tarp, some work boots and a pair of overalls. She lays them out on the ground.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

And now he is dead, and I bet when he saw me he probably thought I would be just another notch on his belt. Little did he know that there are more dangerous predators out there than him.

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WIDE SHOT-Passenger side of car.

The Woman puts on the overalls and the work boots. She then unfolds the tarp and spreads it out on the ground along side the passenger side of the car.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

Now comes the fun part.

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MEDIUM SHOT as the Woman opens the passenger side door and Carl’s corpse falls out of the car and lands on the tarp.

The Woman positions Carl’s corpse and then rolls him up in the tarp. She then drags Carl’s tarp wrapped corpse to the back of the car. She then picks him up and stuffs him into the empty trunk. The woman then removes her overalls and work boots and throws them in also.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

It’s a good thing I have lots of experience moving dead bodies.

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WIDE SHOT as the Woman gets back in the car, the engine starts and she drives out back onto the road.

CUT TO:

LONG SHOTS of the car driving down the road

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INSIDE OF CAR:

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

So, there you have it, if you plan right you can have a perfect night.

Red and blue flashing lights suddenly appear behind the woman’s car. The Woman looks up at her rearview mirror.

WOMAN:
(V.O.)

Of course, you can’t plan for everything.

WOMAN:

Damn.

SCREEN CUTS TO BLACK- the words THE END? Appear on screen.

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