My Dark Dreams

you could not find anything, after not seeing anybody

around Tony got into the car and drove a Allie all the way

home. After Allie was dropped off at her home instead of

going back to his house but if Tony went to Mr Prime, see

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Mr prime lived alone in his cabin up in the woods Tony went

to go check on him.

When Tony got to the cabin he could see the front door wide

open that was very unlike Mr Prime, Tony drew his gun

walking slowly up to the cabin door Tony gently nudge the

door open a little more walking in slowly.

Then Tony yelled

DETECTIVE TONY PRIME

"Hey pops!"

He looked around the cabin he found Mr Prime, Mr Prime

wasn't in study room reading. Tony said

DETECTIVE TONY PRIME (CONT'D)

"pops why didn't you answer when I

was yelling for you?"

MR PRIME:

"ok I'm sorry my boy I really

didn't hear you I was really into

my book and started to fall

asleep."

DETECTIVE TONY PRIME

"that's okay pops I'm just glad

you're OK I assume something was

wrong when I saw the front door to

the cabin opened."

MR PRIME:

" my front door was open?"

TONY PRIME:

" yeah you didn't realize it was

open?"

The fact that at the front door was open and Mr Prime

wasn't aware of it had Tony concern so you did a quick

search around from the house there was no sign of any

intruder, but Tony spend the night just to make sure

nothing was wrong. The next day at the police station, Tony

was still concerned about Mr Prime's door being opened Tony

knew that he had to focus on mysterious times killer case.

Commander JD called detective Tony into his office,

commander JD told detective Tony the fact that the time

killer was getting a little more brave every time as

showed detective Tony a new message for him this time the

note read.

Good morning detective last night was fun you might have

one, but we're not done do you know what's 4 + 1 equal if

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you said 5 then that's who you must keep alive. The murder

will take place at 5 sign your friendly neighborhood time

killer, detective Tony began to grind his teeth he handed

commander JD back to note as he headed out to a squad car.

Then tire police force was mobilize searching the streets

for the mysterious time killer, but not knowing if the time

killer is male or female didn't help and it was now 4:35

p.m. time is running out.

Is the technical name was driving down who's going through

the murders in his head, he couldn't figure out the time

killers patterns all the victims that time killer had

killed had nothing in common but then I thought about it

each of the victims had a trophy from a martial arts

competition except for victim number 4 but victim number 4

was an ex Marine officer who earned several metals which

one."

Of his medals with a metal of honor could that be it could

the answer is it possible is the time killer murdering

people who have martial arts training?

Detective Tony quickly turned on his science and began

driving like a madman, he radioed his fellow officers

telling them to be on the lookout for anyone with martial

arts skills telling them that and that was going to be the

time killers next.

That was going to be the time killer's next victim, when

Detective Tony look at the time on his dashboard the time

read 4:
55 there is five mins left.

Could detective Tony make it? Detective Tony drove past so

many houses looking to see anything sign of anyone

struggling fighting off an attacker, there was a minute

left then detective Tony saw it agate to the backyard left

wide open.

He slammed on his brakes on squad car quickly getting out

running up to the back gate that was wide open, when he got

to the back yard it was too late the time killer already

made the killing a young teenage girl murdered by her pool.

Tony approach the body as he got closer he noticed

something out of his right eye a man, shrouded in darkness

standing in the corner of the fence Detective Tony yelled

freeze at first the man stood-still.

Detective Tony approached the man the closer he got to the

man the more he could make out an eerie evil smile this was

the same feeling had when it was on his back of his neck.

This was the time killer for sure Detective Tony feel it

deep down in his guts then the man jumped the fence

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detective Tony ran after the man Detective Tony Fire a

warning shot at the man, but the man kept on On running the

man ran around a corner when Detective Tony got around the

same corner the man had disappeared.

Detective Tony headed back to where the body was he radioed

in his fellow officers when the rest of the officers

arrived at the crime scene.

The first person to question Detective Tony what's

commander JD, detective Tony gave him a description of the

man even though detective Tony Couldn't see his face

detective Tony gave a description of his height, other then

the fact that the time killer was male and around 6.4 in

height the police had nothing more to go on.

Commander JD told Detective Tony to once again clock out

that he would take care of all the paperwork, detective

Tony soon saw why there were news reporters detective Tony

slowly made his way to his car as he slowly and Drove off

Heading back to his home.

When he arrived waiting for him outside his apartment, was

Mr Prime and Allie Tony stepped out of the car Tony walked

up to Mr Prime and Allie. Tony asked them

TONY PRIME (CONT'D)

"what they were doing there?"

MR PRIME:

"I was only stopping by for a

small visit when I ran into

Allie."

ALLIE CARRANZA:

"I have herd Strange sound late

last night sounds of scratching

and growling at her front door."

Tony invited them in and told Allie she could spend the

night. Tony Mr Prime and Allie SAT around on the table

drinking this reminded Tony of the first time he ever had a

drink with Mr. Prime on his 17th birthday because it was

the day that Mr prime caught him and Allie going into his

liquor cabinet.

(Flash back)

TONY PRIME AGE 17

"Spiss Allie over here."

ALLIE CARRANZA AGE 17

(Whisper) "Tony did you get you

dad's keys to his liquor cabinet?

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TONY PRIME:

(Whisper) "Yes he was a sleep I

had to tip tote pasted him to get

them."

MR PRIME:

(Laugh) "so how far did you two

get with my keys."

Tony and Allie look at each other and could say was.

TONY PRIME AGE 17, AND ALLIE CARRANZA

AGE 17

"We're Both dead."

MR PRIME:

(Laugh)"no but you're going to

wish you were. But seeing that

today is a special day I'll let it

slide this time."

AS HE PULLED OUT THREE CHAMPAGNE GLASSES, THEY SAT DOWN AND

DRINK AT THE TABLE TO THEM THE CHAMPAGNE TASTED BITTER IT

WAS THEIR FIRST TIME EVER TASTING CHAMPAGNE THAT DAY MR

PRIME MADE TONY PROMISED NEVER TO GO INTO HIS LIQUOR

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