Agoric_c's comments

"What do I owe you for the bruise?" / "Old time shake."
should be
"What do I owe you for the brews?" / "Old time's sake."

"They gettin' doped and mixing up at the races."
should be
"Takin' dope and mixing up the races."

"I'll let you play the blues."
should be
"It's your 'Untitled Blues'."

"Evil got to Savannah is at work" should be "Evil Dr. Sivana is at work." It's a reference to a mad scientist in the old Captain Marvel comic books.

Corrections for page 1:

“He’s quite undependable.” should be: “He’s quiet and dependable.”

“A lot of cheap dames and beer.” should be: “A lot of cheap dames and beards.”

“Yeah, but they were nothing but laughing daddies, you know?” should be: “Yeah, but they were not finger-poppin’ daddies, kiddo.” more »

It should be "how many dots you could afford to SPARE," not "how many dots you could afford to SPEND."

In the movie, Calloway says: "I don't want another murder in this case, and you were born to be murdered, so you're going to hear the facts."
This transcript says: "I don't want another murder in this case, so you're going to hear the facts." Leaves out the most memorable line! more »

On p. 24, should be "the fall of the curtain," not "the follow the curtain."

This transcript leaves out lots of dialogue. :-(