4Closed Page #5

Year:
2013
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So come on. How about that phone

call.

Ally?

No no it's Jake.

Did they release you? That bail

cost me $3,000 dollars.

No. They can't release me. They

are still processing the bond.

I'm stuck here at the station. Look,

Bud I tried calling Ally alright.

I tried texting her. She's not answering.

They are giving me one more chance.

So please, first of all I swear to you.

I didn't beat that guy up. I hit him once.

And he had it coming. But anyway, I've

just been sitting here thinking and

I know I'm being completely paranoid

but I think that somehow Forest Hayes

might be causing all of this.

All of it. All the problems. The

problems with the bank account.

The credit cards. And all the

stuff he said at the restaurant.

There are things that no way he

could know unless

Unless what?

I know this sounds crazy, It's like he's

there. Unless he's got microphones or cameras.

Remember he had that electronic

shop?

And he installed that auto lock

system?

And I keep finding foot prints

all over the place but I think

somehow that guy is

getting in our house.

So I need you to get over there

before Alley and Christine get home.

And just stay with them until I

get out of here.

Bud, Bud, I need you.

Ally and Christine need you.

And I can't be there.

Yeah, I hear yeah, I'm on my

way.

Thank you.

What was your reason for wanting to

execute a quit claim deed on the property?

Too much work.

What's too much work?

Purchasing a foreclosed

property. It's a lot of work.

Oh. Yeah.

It can be a lot of work, That's

for sure.

Especially if the previous owner

didn't take care of the property.

I just need to see your I.D.

Um, your driver's License.

This address does not match the

once on the deed.

We didn't get a chance to notify the DMV yet,

we just bought the property no so long ago so.

Can you make an exception?

Oh, honey. Um...

It's ok.

I can go ahead and notarize them

and it won't be a problem.

I just need you to sign here.

And there for me.

Ok. So if you could put your

fingerprint right here. Right there.

I'll stamp this.

And you'll be off to the county clerks

office now. And then you'll be all done.

Thank you.

Give me my daughter. You take me

to my daughter.

What did I say?

Mom.

Christine.

Where are we?

I don't know.

We have to get out of here.

How?

Oh my god.

We're in our house.

What?

We're in our house?

Yes.

We have to leave.

I got it. I got it.

Hurry mom.

He's coming.

Hurry mom.

He's coming.

You guys know where you are?

You're in dream house.

My dad built a bunker. Nooks

never came.

As you can see I kept my word.

Dear Jake. I'm filling for

divorce.

I'm taking Christine with me.

Furthermore, I want to right the

wrong that I have done.

I have signed a quit claim deed.

So Forest Hayes can get his

house back.

It's such a tragedy, you not

being able to get your drinking

and abusive behavior

under control.

Ally.

That's the note that the police

are gonna find in your car.

It's gonna look like Jake rigged

the house with explosives.

After he found out that you

filled for divorce.

Then he's going to kill himself.

And you two.

You are a free man.

Bartender came through; Identified

Forest Hayes and what went down.

Still don't know what's going on

between the two of you.

He's trying to get his house

back.

See this?

This is my new house.

It's pretty isn't it?

I know, I designed it

myself.

Why?

I didn't want to have to be a

bad guy.

I didn't want to have to blow it

up.

But you ruined it.

You and your family. You soiled

my house.

My memories.

I'm not a bad guy.

But when someone takes something

that is not theirs,

I strike back.

I take what's mine!

I got the house totally watched.

Either one of you tries to

escape,

I push this button. Right here.

You won't make it past the blast

radius.

Christine?

Hey!

Hurry!

Come on.

Hurry Mom.

There's got to be a way to get

out.

I need you to go to the

neighbor's house. Call the police.

Relax. Relax.

I'm scared mom.

Me too. You have to do this. You

have to be strong.

Ok Ok.

I'll see you there. I love you.

Go go go go.

Bud, it's Jake. Would you call

me when you get this?

I want to make sure you're on

your way.

Take a left on country side.

That's faster.

Dad?

Dad! Dad!

Are you ok?

Yeah

Pills. Pills.

I will go get help.

Ok Ok. Stay here.

Alright.

Christine!

You ok?

Honey wake up.

I'll kill us all if I have to.

She's a girl. Leave her alone.

She just a girl.

Is she? Is she?

You caused all this!

You did!

This is what I'm gonna do to

you.

Left here.

Aah!

Bud, what happened?

Ally!

What's going on?

We got to go!

Christine!

The auto lock.

Come on Come on.

We can use the exit in the

basement.

Right here. Right here.

Go go go.

Go in.

What is this?

It's a way out dad.

Over there.

This is my house.

God.

What.

Will you be ok?

Yes.

I love you.

I love you too.

I love you grandpa.

See you later.

It's a whole lot of work that's

got to be done.

Are you going to be alright?

You're lucky to

be alive.

Thank you.

Sorry Mr. Turner.

Thanks for everything.

You ok?

Yeah. I am.

I love you Daddy.

I love you Mom.

It's just a house.

It's just a house.

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