Eloise Page #3

Synopsis: Set in a defunct insane asylum known as 'Eloise,' four friends break into the abandoned institution in hopes of finding a death certificate, which will grant one of them the rights to a sizable inheritance. While inside the asylum, the group not only finds that Eloise houses a horrifying history but also the truth about their own tragic pasts.
Director(s): Robert Legato
Production: Vinson Films
 
IMDB:
4.5
Metacritic:
15
Rotten Tomatoes:
0%
R
Year:
2017
89 min
155 Views


How would you like to use your

camera here tonight?

Uh... listen, I need to collect

some papers...

Documents.

Documents... on my aunt,

and they're locked away

in a top secret location...

- Annex.

- What?

- The Annex.

- Yes.

The Annex, it's on

the 5th floor of the Annex.

Yeah, let's go!

The Annex, the Annex,

it's on the 5th floor,

I need to get permission first.

No! He's gotta get

permission first.

But she's running away.

Yes, you go in through here,

then down this corridor,

up the back stairs.

The administration building

is locked tight,

but you can get in

through the power station.

They never lock it.

Oh, oh, this will be great!

- This will be, an adventure!

- And he's touching me.

[WOMAN'S VOICE]

Hey, Scotty, can you help me

with the groceries, please?

There's just a few more bags in the car!

- Who's that?

- I don't know.

- Who's that?

- I'll be back.

Keep walking back slow.

Look at this.

No, no, no, hell no, man.

I know what you're thinking.

I am not going to Eloise,

with a crazy dude, jumping on

the bed like he's Daffy Duck.

You know what, I'm done, dude.

Look, he obviously knows all

of this sh*t like the back

of his hand, we're golden.

Rain Man's on me.

Yeah, you babysit him.

Okay.

This is them.

This is Dell. This is...

I don't know his name.

What the hell are you doing here?

I was just gonna ask you

the same question.

I live here, he's my bro and

you've got 15 seconds

before I call 911.

- Whoa, whoa.

- I have friends!

How did you meet them, sweetie?

No, no, we found him,

we found him, all right?

We just want to take a tour of Eloise,

and Scott's the best person...

How did you meet?

- [DELL] We met him on his site.

- Yeah.

He's got a hot, little site @eloise.

We looked him up, right?

We found the site, his picture's

on there, all the information.

It's great.

Okay, well then,

tomorrow we can call the staff

and get back to you guys.

No, no, I was gonna use my new camera!

He wants to use his new camera.

I just said that.

I need to talk to you

outside for a minute.

Okay.

Scotty, you stay with Dill.

Jacob, no. Don't leave me...

Okay, just let me start

from the beginning, all right?

My father just passed away, okay?

Hey, man, Jacob, man, come on, man,

y'all playing games.

I wanna touch you.

No, not with no pants on.

Get your pants on.

And I know it's asking a lot,

but no one knows

that place better than your brother.

[DELL] Put your pants on!

I know, and he's all I've got

and I won't

have him taken advantage of.

He is obsessed with that place

and if he wanders off

or something happens...

Quick in, quick out.

I'll watch him, I promise.

You'll watch him?

- Yeah.

- In Eloise?

I think you're gonna have your

hands full keeping up with him.

- Put your head here.

- Yo, man.

Put it there. Put it on!

[PIA]

Now that you got him all riled up,

it's impossible to say no to him.

Okay, quick in, quick out,

and I'm coming.

Yes! Thank you.

Hey... Pia's in.

You guys wanna see something funny?

- Scott, don't!

- ( CHUCKLING ) No.

Don't!

No, this will be fun,

this will be an adventure.

Yeah, yeah...

- It's all good.

- It's gonna be something.

Don't look too happy about it.

It's gonna be a disaster,

that's what it's gonna be.

This is ridiculous.

Pants!

Do you need like a bag or...

Bag!

Has anyone ever died during

this therapy, Doctor?

Medicine is not an exact science.

Why is he so fascinated with this place?

Careful, careful, man, careful!

Our mom used to be a nurse here.

She left for work one day

when I was about four,

so Scotty was six.

She just never came home.

Never heard from her again, either.

Sometimes I think Scott still thinks

she's in here for something.

- So, you know where we are?

- Yes... I have a map.

You got a map. So, what used

to be here, anyways?

It's always been this, it's a cemetery.

Potter's Field, it's where they

buried the patients.

The patients? You mean all this

time we walking

on crazy dead people?

Of course they're crazy,

it's a mental institution.

Our dad went a little nuts

with Scotty needing

special attention and all,

so it was pretty much

up to me to look out for him

once we realized

she was never coming back.

That's gotta be pretty tough

for a four-year-old.

Yeah, but... that's life

I guess.

So, what was it like living

without a mom?

You have no idea.

Actually I do.

I barely even remember her.

When she left I was probably

a little angry,

so I tried to just forget all about her.

What about you?

Never really met her,

so I don't know what I missed.

My father, he would never even

speak about her.

He didn't really get along too well.

Hey, y'all know we're walking

on crazy dead people, right?

Oh, okay, okay, y'all in love, okay.

( THUNDER ROLLING )

Okay, we're gonna go in through

here and from here,

we're gonna go through the power

station and from there

we're gonna go to the

administration building.

Hey buddy, is there uh...

Is there any other way into this

situation besides... this?

No.

Okay.

[DELL]

"Any other way into this situation?"

How you holding up, Jacob?

Okay.

Oh, God.

You okay?

Yeah, I'm just a little claustrophobic.

You know, no big deal.

Everybody's afraid of something.

I don't do needles.

I wouldn't say afraid necessarily...

just, you know... a little

uncomfortable.

- [PIA] Okay.

- That's bullshit. Bullshit.

I wasn't talking to you,

dipshit... f***.

- All right.

- It's okay.

Here we go.

Oh sh*t.

( LOUD CLANG )

Yo, what was that?

That's the building settling.

This area's famous for its sinkholes.

What, are you scared?

Man, hell no, I ain't scared.

Ah, bullshit.

Yeah, bullshit, don't tell

me that didn't scare

the piss out of you just a little bit.

Look at that, what's that on your pants?

That's rain, dipshit.

That's some pissy-ass rain.

A minute ago, you was crying

about being claustrophobic.

This place gives me the creeps.

Thank you. Finally somebody

can admit that this place

gives them the creeps.

This is my favorite part.

Down here are the catacombs.

This is where they used to store

the dead bodies

when winter hit because it

was too cold to bury them.

Enough with the dead bodies, man.

Come on.

Okay, these are stairs.

We have to go up 43 more.

Scott, easy.

Yo, what's that?

The lights are on a motion

sensor. Du'h, Dell, du'h!

That ain't funny.

Wait, wait, stop, stop!

That's her... that's Eloise.

So, where the hell are we?

Okay, we're here now...

Do you remember?

Mom... Mom used to take you

to work sometimes,

do you remember?

Not really.

No, no, do you remember mom used

to take you to work sometimes?

No.

Annex is on the 5th floor

of the next building.

You go through these stairs.

It's not in this building?

No, that's why they call it the Annex!

It has very restricted access.

( TAPPING ON WINDOW )

Flashlights! Flashlights!

( WHIMPERING )

Shh!

Hold on, I think I hear something.

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