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Synopsis: An alcoholic, suicidal retired soldier, suffering from PTSD and the loss of his wife during child birth struggles to keep his sanity after his 14 year old daughter dies of a drugs overdose. Mack vows revenge on the dealer responsible for her death.
 
IMDB:
1.4
Year:
2012
60 min
38 Views


I don't know why

you do this for a living.

Don't worry.

They might have dogs or something.

We shouldn't just waltz in here.

Is anyone there?

Hello?

Maribel!

- What is it?

- There was a vulture in here.

It scared me.

The area filled with vultures

when they built the incinerator.

How did that thing get in here?

Just like I did.

Everything's open.

They left in a hurry.

- Maybe they were evacuated.

- Don't start.

Something had to happen

for them to leave like this.

She's right.

They probably saw Rafa

and took him with them.

Don't worry.

If they'd seen Rafa

they'd have come looking for us.

The cars aren't working.

I don't like this one bit.

I need to talk to my sister.

You may be worried about your kids,

but we all have families here.

So stop hogging

all the attention already!

We should take what we can carry

from the kitchen and walk to town.

You can't walk to town, Felix.

It's way too far.

By road.

We can take the shortcut

through the gorge.

Did you try the phone?

- What do you think?

- It doesn't work.

What the f***?

Relax, it's probably only this area.

I'm sure they're fine.

Don't touch me. Leave me alone.

Felix is right.

We should get going.

Hello?

Hello?

If they're hikers, it's normal

for them to get up early.

And leave everything like this?

This is used for hiking.

And it's expensive equipment.

It makes sense

to take it with you,

not leave it here

for anyone to take.

What then?

I don't know.

It seems odd to me.

There's somebody up there.

Maybe it's Rafa.

Rafa!

Rafa!

Rafa!

No, that's not Rafa.

It must be one of the hikers.

Hey!

Hey!

Hey!

- Where the hell did he go?

- Must be a shepherd.

Probably thought we're a bunch

of city slickers and took off.

Should we climb up there?

We won't find a phone booth.

What?

I'm tired.

Promise me you won't do

what Rafa did.

What are you talking about?

You brought me here

to break up with me, right?

You had to do it

in front of all your friends.

Hey, what's wrong?

Are you crying?

That's why we came, isn't it?

- Why?

- To break up.

This is the end, right?

Run. Run!

Cova!

Hugo!

Hugo!

Hugo!

Don't move!

Where's Cova?

Cova!

Cova!

Cova!

Cova!

She's gone.

She's not here anymore.

No!

It's a trap.

This is why he brought us here.

The person we saw on the mountain

could be Angel.

He probably let the goats loose

in the gorge.

He seemed fine the last time

I saw him,

but they warned me

he was still on medication

and had fits of violence.

After all, he's the reason

we're out here.

Would you shut the f*** up already?

Angel fried the cars?

And caused the blackout?

He had everybody evacuated?

It was meant for us.

Cova was an accident.

- Shut the f*** up!

- Hugo, damn it!

- I can't stand her.

- Let's keep watch.

We don't know what's happening.

There could be animals,

or people lost like us.

We have to be on the lookout.

We'll take turns every few hours.

Why keep watch?

There's nobody.

Felix.

You want me to stay with you?

No, you'd better get some rest.

We'll have to come back tomorrow

with a rescue team.

What did you see?

You looked worried before.

You were going to say something...

No.

All this...

Okay.

Wake me up, no matter what, okay?

Thanks.

Hugo, where are you going?

- You don't hear it?

- What?

A car just drove by!

I can still hear it!

- It's only birds.

- No, damn it. It just drove by.

We missed it.

Who the hell was keeping watch?

Who the hell was keeping watch?

- We did it earlier.

- We were with Sergio and he said...

'Sergio! Sergio!

"Sergio!

"Sergio!

"Sergio!

Sergio!

Sergio!

From now on nobody strays

from the group.

Sergio!

Sergio!

Sergio!

It's cold.

There's no smoke or anything.

It's been here for a while.

It's not what you heard.

It was at 12:
20.

The same time.

This makes no sense.

There's somebody down there!

He's dead.

He must have died in the crash.

At 8:
15.

Before the blackout.

No!

- Shut the f*** up!

- Calm down, Hugo.

Tell her to calm down!

It's Angel!

Don't you recognize him?

It's Angel!

It's all just like he said.

The animals,

the empty houses,

the abandoned cars...

He said a million things.

He was locked up for years.

And none of you ever visited him.

Look. I bet it was you calling,

that's why he crashed.

Shut the f*** up!

No, you shut up!

You shouldn't even be here.

- Don't think you fooled anyone.

- That's enough!

Just be quiet.

We can't leave him there.

- He can rot there for all I care.

- Come on.

Let's go.

I can't...

You'll get a sunburn.

The last one.

You smoke it.

I don't know if we'll have

another chance to talk.

- Felix, no".

- Hugo.

Listen to me.

We have nothing to talk about.

You're a son of a b*tch.

I was expecting to find someone

you're not.

Someone I had fabricated.

Because you're a piece of sh*t.

You've never loved anybody

in your whole life.

You don't know what it means.

I wish it had happened to you.

Or that brat you brought along

to trick whoever.

Anyone except Cova.

So I wouldn't have to see

how stupid I've been.

My whole life.

You're right.

I am a piece of sh*t.

Hugo?

Hugo!

Hugo!

Hugo!

Hugo!

Hugo!

Hugo!

What's wrong?

Don't go in the water!

Eva! Eva, no!

You knew what was happening

since Rafa disappeared.

We're going to vanish

one by one.

We should take all the food

we can carry.

Give me your backpack.

Where's Felix?

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Felix!

Come here, boy!

I have a dog.

His name is Blondie.

He's so cute...

He's a Jack Russell.

Why didn't you bring him?

Because he always runs away.

I was afraid he'd get lost

if I brought him.

I wonder if he's okay.

I must sound silly, thinking

about Blondie at a time like this...

But we keep each other company.

- And you?

- What?

Who are you thinking about?

What is that?

Let's go see what that was.

Look.

- What are you doing?

- Giving it food.

No, Sara. Let's go.

No, it must be hungry.

Here, boy!

Come here.

- Sara, let's go.

- I'm coming.

Here, here.

Come on, please.

Where did they come from?

I don't know.

They smell the food.

Get them away from me!

I'm getting nervous!

Sara, relax.

Sara, don't show your fear.

They could bite you.

Get away!

Lower your arms.

- I can't move, damn it!

- Lower your arms!

Sara.

Stay calm.

Get on the bike. I'll toss them food

and we'll ride away.

Gently.

Gently, Sara.

- Did it bite you?

- No.

Get on the bike.

Now!

Here they come!

Don't look back!

Pass me, Sara!

I can't!

Yes, you can!

Come on, pass me!

Come on!

Faster, Sara!

You can do it, Sara!

Look at me.

Come on, faster!

They stopped chasing us!

But keep going, Sara!

Eva, don't fall behind!

Don't leave me alone, Felix.

I'm scared. Please!

You're not alone, we're all here.

Please, don't leave me!

Don't leave me!

Talk to me!

Please, please...

Talk to me, Sara!

Talk to me!

Please...

Sara!

She was all alone...

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