Intruders Page #4

Synopsis: Anna suffers from agoraphobia so crippling that when a trio of criminals break into her house, she cannot bring herself to flee. But what the intruders don't realize is that agoraphobia is not her only problem.
Director(s): Adam Schindler
  2 nominations.
 
IMDB:
5.7
Metacritic:
39
R
Year:
2015
90 min
494 Views


We weren't doing a bad thing.

You have to believe me.

Murder's murder.

No! We were fixing them!

Is that

what you'd tell yourselves?

It's the truth!

They needed our help.

They were sick,

just like Daddy was.

He said he loved me all along,

but... that didn't stop him

from doing what he did to me.

It wasn't so bad after a while,

'cause he would hold me

afterwards and...

Conrad stopped him?

Yeah, he saved me.

He wrapped the sheet

around father's neck

and he pulled it so tight!

When it was all over,

Connie looked at me and I knew.

I knew he would never hurt me.

That he loved me.

That's when you stopped

leaving the house, yeah?

And he built this room

to punish f***ing pedophiles

like your dad.

Ah, I saw some twisted

f***ing sh*t, but this...

Pfft, you must be really proud

of yourself.

No, I would've stopped,

but they didn't show me

- they were sorry!

- How would they do that?

Buy you flowers?

Dear Anna,

so sorry to let you down.

- Yours truly, your stand-in dad.

- Stop.

So pleased I got to join you

in your beautiful basement

so we could help you erase

the feeling

of Daddy between your legs.

- Stop...

- Your brother was a sick f***!

He got his rocks off

killing your dad,

and he wanted to relive

the moment over and over again.

- That's not true.

- Little crazy sister,

little Anna, too scared

to leave, too dumb...

- No!

- Shut the f*** up! Just stop!

Oh, I'm sorry, Dan.

Sorry to mess with your girl.

(SIGHING)

Dan.

Hmm...?

Come to the mirror.

What do you want?

I want him to pay.

Oh...

Okay, he's dead, Anna.

Okay?

He's been dead for a long time.

No.

Him.

Do it.

Do what now?

I'll let you go.

No.

Please?

I'm not like them.

Just do it!

Now dammit, Dan!

This is how?

This is how they show you

they're sorry?

So much regret,

so much remorse,

that they just...

bang.

They were supposed

to take responsibility

for what they did!

Just like you.

Don't you feel sorry

for what you did?

Big brothers are supposed to

protect their younger siblings,

which is more than you did

for Vance.

- Stop talking about him.

- You know it's your fault!

- Shut your mouth.

- You knew he looked up to you.

You ever wonder if things

would've turned out differently

if only...

I know

what you're trying to do.

It doesn't change the truth.

I could let you go right now,

and there's nowhere you could go

to get away from what you did.

(SNIFFLING)

- (SOBBING)

- I'm sorry!

Good.

That's good. Now... now show me.

(SOBBING)

- Oh...

- Show me you're sorry.

Show me.

You think I'm that weak?

(LAUGHING)

I'd live a thousand years

with this on my shoulders

before I pull this trigger.

You will... eventually.

One bullet for one man.

No!

What... what...

what are you doing?

I found my way out.

You killed Vance,

- you killed Perry...

- F***.

But you're still alive, Dan.

That doesn't mean anything!

Ah, let's see.

(MOANING)

- Argh...!

- Mm! Please.

No, no! Please stop!

Please don't hurt him.

(DAN GROANING)

(DAN PANTING)

F***.

Come on.

Alright, brother, come on.

No.

F***ing...

burn this house down.

Burn his f***ing memories.

Burn his f***ing

f***ed-up family.

Ah!

(MUTTERING)

all f***ing locked up.

I let you go.

Uh, yeah,

guess that was a mistake.

This is what you wanted,

isn't it?

It was.

Now I just wanna see you burn.

(GRUNTING)

Argh!! F***!

F***!

B*tch.

Huh? C'mere.

C'mere. C'mon.

Ah!!

(GLASS BREAKING)

Ah!!! Ah!

I've got an idea.

- (ANNA WHIMPERING)

- Ah! Ah!

Ah! No!

Don't!

No!

Don't! Ah!

Ah!!

One last walk

down memory lane.

Hold still! I'll give it to you

like Daddy did, just like Papa.

Be a good little girl.

It'll be over soon.

Hold still, Daddy's little girl.

Little angel.

Yeah, that's it, just lie there,

you broken little b*tch.

Hey! Stop!

Ah! Stop, stop, stop, stop!

Stop! Stop!

This won't bring Vance back!

No more killing.

(CLICK)

I forgive you.

(SNIFFLING, THEN SIGHING)

(ENGINE STARTING)

(CAR DRIVING AWAY)

(CRICKETS CHIRRING)

(DISTANT SIRENS)

(GLASS SHATTERING)

(GLASS SHATTERING)

(SIRENS APPROACHING)

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