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Synopsis: South bay is a sin city, ruled by thugs and protected by the police. Mr President wants an ultimate investigation about the death of Mr Thompson. Sergent Chuks is the right officer for such underground mission.
Genre: Action, Thriller
Original Story by: OKAFOR DAMIAN ANIELOZIE
Year:
2017
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EXIT:

57 EXT - DAY - HOTEL

Mary parking her car in a hotel, she alights quickly and

walk straight to the hotel entrance door

58 INT - DAY - HOTEL

Goes straight to the receptionist... she interacts with her

(inaudible) as she moves up and climb the stair case.

59 INT- DAY - HOTEL - CONTINOUS

Chuks arranging his cloths, the door bell rings... he moves

to the door and open it... mary standing, he allows her in

with a mean face.

MARY:

Sorry I came again, maybe

disturbing you... just wanna ask

you one question.... You parking

immediately?

CHUKS:

Why are you here?

(His gun and id card on the bed, he hides it with cloths)

MARY:

Ummm... I came to know the time

you will leave tomorrow, so I will

come and take you to the park

CHUKS:

I travel, anytime, alone

MARY:

You not happy, I came to render my

help

CHUKS:

Our help is in the name of the Lord

MARY:

Who made heaven and earth...

(CHUCKLES)

CHUKS:

Not in the mood.... Thanks

MARY:

I wanted you to stay, but....

Ken.... My brother... who would

have protected you, is in jail...

seeing you around me, they will

kill you..

CHUKS:

I need no protection... My days are

numbered... If you take my hand,

I’ll kill anyone that comes neither

my way nor your way...

MARY:

Who are you?

CHUKS:

05am ... come and take me to South

Bay Park

MARY:

Thanks.... My pleasure.....

(she turns to go)

You still have to move to South

bay?

(when she gets closer to the door, she stop and turn, stare

at him)

Come with me Chuks

CHUKS:

Am perfect here

MARY:

Your luggage are ready ... My house

is cold, free and lonely... A

night with you will change the

gloomy face of my lonely house to a

happy home.... It is close to the

park...

CHUKS:

What if I said No?

MARY:

It makes no difference...

She comes back, do as if she wants to kiss chuks, pick chuks

bag and starts going... chuks smiled, pick the other of his

bag and join her at the door. He hands over the room key to

the receptionist...

DISSOLVES:

60 INT - HOTEL BAR - DAY

THESE SCENE OPENS IN THE BAR WHERE DON P IS DRINKING WITH

SOME GIRLS AND HIS TWO BODYGUARDS. BLAZER COMES IN AND GOES

STRAIGHT TO HIS TABLE. LOOKING AT THE GIRLS ROUND

BLAZER:

(SCREAMS) get a f*** outta here...

(turns to don p) how do you see

Southbay?

DON P:

(Brings out a cigar to lite) nice

Place to stay

ONE OF BLAZERS BOYS TAKES THE CIGAR OUT FROM HIS MOUTH, AND

DON P’S BOYS TRIES TO REACT, GUN POINTS ON THEM, BLAZERS BOY

HITS ONE AND COLLECTS HIS GUN.

BLAZER:

Don pedro son of kunja pedro killed

In ajao, long time ago. You came to

Southbay, rob, kill and trade on my

Business but never ask, who owns

The southbay... Who rules here?

DON P:

My business is money making

BLAZERS BOY HIT HIM ON HIS FACE, ABOUT TO HIT THE SECOND

TIME, BLAZER GIVES HIM SIGN, LITES HIS CIGAR

BLAZER:

Your business is my business

DON P:

Who the a hell are you?

BLAZER SCREAMS AS HE SHOT ONE OF HIS BOYS

BLAZER:

I hate to be asked questions, next

Time i am talking and you

Interrupt, i will waste your

F***ing life, when i am talking,

All you need to do is, give me your

Ears (draws his head close) your

Life worth nothing, i’ll let you

Live. I know your father and he was

My good friend... He saved my life

Then. I will pay him back by

Sparing your life, taking little

Dues from you and give you some of

The areas in southbay as their

Lord. But must not exceed limit. I

Am blazer pyro, lord of southbay,

The smoking monk. You pay your dues

Very well, i will let you stay and

Live larger and happy.

HE STANDS UP AND GOES OUT WITH HIS BOYS, DON P SMILES AND

BRINGS OUT ANOTHER CIGAR

DISSOLVES:

61 INT - DAY - CHURCH

CAMERA OPENS ON DON AND HIS WIFE BETTY COMING INSIDE THE

CHURCH, AND THEN PROCEEDS TO THE CHORISTERS, THEN LOCATES

THE ELDERS OF THE CHURCH TO MRS ROSY AND SOME OF THE WOMEN

IN THE CHURCH.

THEN THE CAMERA MOVES TO THE PASTOR WHO IS TALKING AND

PREACHING.

CAMERA MOVES TO THE PASTOR WIFE AND TO MARTIN...THEN BACK TO

PASTOR HARRY WHO DAMPENS HIS FACE WITH HIS WHITE

HANDKERCHIEF AND CONTINUES HIS PREACHING...

(PASTORS PREACHING WILL BE BASED ON IDOLATRY AND LOVE,

CORRUPT NATURE OF THE COUNTRY AND SOLUTION)

AFTER THE PREACHING, THE CAMERA NOW MOVES ROUND TO THE

CONGREGATION. SOME ARE DAMPENING THEIR TEARS, SOME ARE

ASTONISHED..... SOME LOOKING AT EACH OTHER, WHILE SOME ARE

IN DEEP PRAYER... MARTIN TAKES THE MICROPHONE, PRAY AND THEN

END THE SERVICE.

PEOPLE WALKS IN GROUPS DISCUSSING AND VERY HAPPY... SOME ARE

SAD... MRS ROSY IS VERY EXCITED.

62 EXT - DAY - CHURCH PREMISES

ROSY:

That’s what I’m talking about...

the preaching is what we need

FIONA:

Yes... he talks well, though he

didn’t concentrate on the bible

readings of today

ROSY:

Holy Spirit directs in different

ways... he knows what he wants and

how he wants it

ESTHER:

I like the way he preached... it

makes me look deep in the bible...

he is good

MAGRET:

He talks as if he has been here

before... he talks more on the

adulterous nature of our women

ROSY:

I guess with him, there will be

changes here

ELDER PAUL:

The preaching looks as if its been

channel to me... How did he come up

with this?

MATHEW:

He has in debt knowledge of

Boulevard... he preaches through

experience... he speaks very well

and doesn’t think about the

offerings like the other

pastor... Everywhere was calm...

He wins their heart...our heart

also

HAROLD:

We have to hear from him... he has

a message of life

DISSOLVES:

63 INT - DAY - POLICE DEPARTMENT

THE CAMERA VIEWS ONE OF THE POLICE DRAGGING A DWARF TO THE

OFFICE OF DPO.

They are talking as the camera moves through the window to

get chuks and mary alighting from their car. Mary very

happy, smiling as she holds on to chuks...

THE CAMERA FOLLOWS THEM TO DPO OFFICE. MARY ENTERS AND DPO

IS SURPRISE; HE ORDERS THE POLICE OFFICER TO RELEASE THE

DWARF WHILE THEY EXIT FROM HIS OFFICE, LEAVING HIM ALONE

WITH MARY.

MARY:

I’ve come back like I told you, to

pay you a surprise visit...

Chuks comes in and greets the dpo with a rough hand shake,

sits down.

CHUKS:

I am Chuks... I have few minutes

to spend here... Have come to take

my brother in law...

MARY:

My brother Ken...

CHUKS:

(Drop a letter to him)

I have heard of your good work

here, I humbly appreciate

DPO:

Does this letter, really comes from

the commissioner?

CHUKS:

You mustn’t tell us what is in the

letter.... We have to go now

DISSOLVES:

64 INT - DAY - POLICE CUSTODY - CONTINOUS

THE CAMERA WILL START FROM THE OPENING OF THE BAR FOR KEN,

THEN MOVES ON TO THE OTHER BARS, WHILE THE INMATES ARE

MAKING NOISE, SOME CURSING AND SOME TRYING TO GRAB CHUKS...

HE INJURES ONE AS THEY ARE MARCHING OUTSIDE.

65 INT - DAY - BAR

The camera views chuks, ken and mary drinking and discussing

in a bar, then a car stop while thugs comes out of it, then

opens the door for their boss...he comes out on white suit

CHUKS:

Who is the b*tch? (Looking at ken)

KEN:

He is coming for me.... Don Pedro

MARY:

Why is he coming back

CHUKS:

Drink... forget about him

Don pedro gets closer to their table, draws a seat and sits

down...smile and puffs a smoke

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OKAFOR DAMIAN ANIELOZIE

Damian Okafor is a Nigerian prolific writer who has written many movie scripts, hiphop songs, poems and Novels. A secondary school teacher, an actor and movie assistant director. more…

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