Retake

Synopsis: A lonely, middle-aged man hires a male prostitute to recreate a road trip from his past.
Genre: Drama, Romance
Director(s): Nick Corporon
Production: Breaking Glass Pictures
 
IMDB:
6.3
Year:
2016
98 min
Website
114 Views


(music, glass shattering)

(upbeat mysterious music)

- [Voice Speaker] Welcome to

Seattle International Airport.

(car engine racing)

- Hey, man.

I like the car.

You mind if I?

My name's Scott.

What's yours?

- Jonathan.

- K.

So your place cool

or we could go around

the corner and touch your thing.

- No my place is fine.

- Safety first.

It's okay.

Don't be nervous.

- Look.

Stop it.

- What is it?

- I want you to do

something for me.

You see the cologne over there?

I want you to wear that for me.

- Is there something wrong

with the way I smell?

- No.

I want you to do what I say.

Now wear it.

For me please.

- Okay.

- No, take your shirt off first.

Not too much.

Not so fast.

You ever do role play?

- What?

- [Jonathan] Keep

your eyes shut.

(photo snapping)

- Who am I suppose to be?

- You're a young guy, lost,

little rough around the edges.

Very temperamental.

- Not a problem.

- Put this on.

(groaning)

No, god damn it.

- What?

What?

Hey man I didn't

do any weird thing.

We could go get some G or.

- I think you should leave.

Come on.

- Now.

- F***in' weirdo.

You're a f***in' weirdo.

- Hey.

- Hey.

- I like your jacket.

- Thank you.

It's not mine.

- It looks nice on you.

- The old man's got a broken

dick, it's a waste of time,

don't even try it.

- Scotty f*** off.

- I'm just trying to help.

- F*** off.

- Good luck, a**hole.

- Thank you.

It's not my first time.

- He'll make you dress

up like his mother!

- Your first time

in San Francisco?

- No.

- Strong, silent type.

I like it.

There we go.

Is that a little smile?

You're a little different

then the other guys

we usually see out there.

- How so?

- I feel like you require

something more intricate.

So what's your thing?

Edging?

Massages?

Bondage?

What do you like?

- Role play.

- I should've guessed.

There's that smile again.

Hmm?

Okay so what's my character?

Am I your student?

Your slave, your?

- You're a young guy,

you're, lost.

Little rough around

the edges but

you're very temperamental.

- I like that.

What's your name?

- Jonathan.

- [Man] What's my name?

- Brandon.

- It's a pleasure to

meet you, Jonathan.

I'm Brandon.

- You see the,

the cologne on the dresser?

- Yes.

- Would you put that

on for me, please?

Not too much now.

Hey.

(photo snapping)

- Wow.

Wasn't expecting that.

So when do we begin?

- It already started.

- No wait.

I'm rough around

the edges, alright?

What was the word you used?

- Temperamental.

- Okay.

Yeah.

Oh, f***.

- Yeah.

Now come here.

- Oh yeah.

(moaning)

Oh yeah.

- Just give me a second.

(groaning)

- Yeah.

F*** me.

F*** me.

Yeah.

Yeah.

(groaning)

That was good.

(knocking on door)

F***.

- [Jonathan]

I'm sorry, this thing just--

- No it's okay.

I'm gonna go anyway.

- I didn't mean to wake you up.

- Thanks for the coffee.

- What are your plans

the next few days?

- Why?

- Thought I might keep

you around for awhile.

- Definitely more than

blow jobs and ass play,

that's like talking and sh*t,

personal stuff.

- I'll double your nightly rate,

give you 500 extra at the end.

- Why don't you give me

double my nightly

rate plus 1,000?

How's that sound?

- Alright.

- Well I'm gonna have to see

you know, half of that

upfront, like a deposit.

I'm sure you're good for it.

- Don't run off with that.

- Relax.

So where we headed anyway?

- The Grand Canyon.

Have you ever been?

- No.

- Me neither, this

will be great.

- We're not flying are

we? I get air sick.

- No we're driving.

- Good.

So what's in the Grand

Canyon, why are we going?

- We should set

some ground rules.

- [Brandon] Okay.

- Rule number one.

Don't ask any

personal questions.

- Are you kidding me?

It's a three day trip, I

can't ask you any questions?

- Personal questions, you

can ask anything you like,

but I reserve the

right not to answer.

- Okay, rule number two.

- We stick with the role

play, you're Brandon.

Always, I'm not gonna refer

to you as anything else.

- [Brandon] Got it.

- And rule number

three, if I ask you

to do something, do it.

- Okay but you're not

gonna ask me to like,

wear a diaper, clean your house?

Not that I'm saying I wouldn't.

Just,

like to know first.

Can we stop by my place?

Grab some clothes

before we leave?

- That won't be necessary,

everything's taken care of.

- Nice ride.

- Throw your arms up in the air.

Excited.

- Okay.

Like,

this?

Woo!

(photo snapping)

- Hold that.

- Why do you use that old thing?

Can't you like take

pictures on your phone

like a normal person?

- Has your hair

always been long?

- [Brandon] Kinda.

Why?

- I'm trying to

picture it shorter.

- I like it long.

Okay so help me out here.

I'm Brandon.

From?

- Kansas City.

- Ah.

Great.

Alright fill in more

blanks for me here,

let me do some research.

What is my

favorite movie?

- Breakfast at Tiffany's.

- Yeah, love me

some Audrey Hepburn.

Are we together?

- [Jonathan] Yes, boyfriends.

- How long?

- Three years.

- Well that's like

20 years in gay time.

- [Jonathan]

Something like that.

- Okay, how did we meet?

- We met in a bar.

- Scandalous.

What is my favorite book?

- [Jonathan] Brave New World.

- Yeah I don't know that book.

What if it was,

the Shining?

Or Carrie, f*** I love

Carrie, oh my god.

What?

Okay I take it you're

not a Stephen King fan.

Good to know.

Brave New World it is.

What is my favorite

thing to do on a

Sunday morning?

- Cook brunch, naked.

- Well is there any

other way to cook brunch?

What do I do for like

work and sh*t?

- That's a tough one.

You've tried

everything artistic.

Music, art, poetry.

But whenever something

doesn't work out you just,

move on to the next.

- [Brandon] What am

I currently in to?

- Music.

- Okay.

Very big question now.

Are we in love?

- Madly.

- [Brandon] Yeah what's my

favorite non-alcoholic beverage?

- [Jonathan] Dr. Pepper.

- I'll have a Dr. Pepper.

I don't smoke that brand.

- You do now.

Shut your eyes.

- Why?

- Come on.

- Oh.

Vintage.

Just like you.

It's gorgeous.

- Huh?

- The sunset, look at it.

Well would you look?

- Yeah.

- Pull over.

- What?

- Pull over, pull over,

right now.

- No I'm already.

- Pull the, Jonathan,

pull the car over.

Jesus.

Don't look at me.

Look out there.

Look out there, come on sit

down, Jonathan sit down.

- [Jonathan] I'm not gotta

side down on the side.

- Yes, yes, sit, sit.

Please.

Good.

Do you see that?

- Yeah it's a sunset,

it happens every day.

- No.

No you don't see it.

- I don't understand,

what are you saying?

You want me to get the camera?

- No, no, f***

no, no camera, no.

I'm gonna do something.

I want you

to breathe.

Good.

And watch.

Take it in.

There's that smile again.

- [Jonathan] Let's go.

- Sorry.

I know you're in charge.

- Kiss me.

- Okay.

Yeah.

- I'm not buying that.

You don't have to stick

your hand on my crotch

to make me feel it.

Now kiss me.

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