The Abandoned Page #4

Synopsis: Take a terrifying plunge into the warped mind of a disturbed young woman. Desperate to get her life back on track, the unstable Streak takes a job as a security guard, working the graveyard shift at a once upscale, now abandoned apartment complex. But on her first night on duty, she discovers a horrifying presence lurking deep within the bowels of the decaying building. With her nerves already on edge, Streak must confront demons both real and imagined as she struggles to keep a grip on her sanity.
Director(s): Eytan Rockaway
  3 nominations.
 
IMDB:
5.0
Metacritic:
32
NOT RATED
Year:
2015
86 min
95 Views


- Please hurry, Cooper!

Please I..

Don't leave me alone!

Cooper.

- What?

- Don't take the elevator.

- Seriously?

[INTENSE MUSIC]

[KEYBOARD CLACKING]

[ELEVATOR WHIRRING]

Oh, come on.

Streak, did you

touch anything up there?

- I'm not doing anything.

[CLANGS]

[ELEVATOR THUDS]

[SIGHS]

- Goddamn generator.

- It's not the generator.

- Maybe we should call someone.

- That's a good idea.

That way we can both be fired

and thrown out in the storm

with the homeless piece of sh*t

that you let in here.

Maybe you can tell 'em

your ghost stories

that'll amuse 'em.

I'm gonna try

to pry this thing open

and get to the breaker.

[GRUNTING]

- Don't do it. It's not safe.

[GRUNTING]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

[WHIRRING]

Cooper, it's closing.

Watch out!

[WHIRRING]

- Uh!

- Cooper!

[WHIRRING CONTINUES]

[CLANGS]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

[PANTING]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[HUFFS]

Cooper, are you okay?

- Yeah, I'm alright.

You know, there's only one thing

I wanna know

that I don't understand.

- What's that?

When you were down

in that shelter

how did you know

where the entrance was?

How did you know

which way to go?

- I don't know.

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

- Did you hear that?

- Hear what?

Oh, my God.

Cooper, you gotta

get out of there.

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

- Well, can you see something?

[INTENSE MUSIC]

What did you see?

- The kids.

They're out.

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

Cooper, can you hear me?

- There's no such thing

as ghosts.

Or your mumbo-jumbo getting in my head.

Just had a few drinks.

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

Wait.

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

Yeah.

Well, let's get this over with.

- In here.

[DOG PANTING]

- I can hear the dog.

Hey, boy.

[WHISTLING]

Come on out now.

Come on, boy. Come here now.

Goddammit.

[WHISTLES]

I'm not going in there.

Hey!

If you're in there..

It's your last chance.

I'm shutting this door.

[WHEELCHAIR RATTLES]

[WHEELCHAIR RATTLING]

[GRUNTS]

- Close the door!

- What's going on?

What's going on?

[WHEELCHAIR RATTLING]

What's going on?

Ow!

- What are you doing?

- Don't go in there!

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

- I can't control it.

- Cooper, no!

- I can't stop!

- No!

Cooper, can you hear me?

[PANTING]

No, no, no.

Oh..

Please.

[GRUNTS]

Come on!

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

Come on! Please, please.

Uh..

Open. Please open.

Please, please, please.

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[GRUNTS]

[PANTING]

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

[FLASHLIGHT CLICKS]

[WHEEL RATTLES]

[FOOTSTEPS THUMPING]

[BREATHING HEAVILY]

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

[COMPUTER BEEPING]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[COMPUTER BEEPING]

[STATIC]

[THUD]

- Who's that?

Hello?

- Are you one

of the grown-ups?

[FOOTSTEPS THUMPING]

[PANTING]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[FOOTSTEPS THUMPING]

[PANTING]

[CHAIR SCREECHING]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

What are you doing here?

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

[CHAIRS SCREECHING]

[INDISTINCT WHISPERING]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

[SCREAMING]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

- Cooper, can you hear me?

[PANTING]

Hi, boy! You're a good boy!

You're gonna help me!

You're gonna tell me

where he is, right?

[INTENSE MUSIC]

Come on, come on.

Go! Go!

Come on, let's go!

[PANTING]

[BREATHING HEAVILY]

[DOG PANTING]

Cooper, are you there?

Cooper.

Cooper.

Cooper?

Cooper, can you hear me? Cooper?

Cooper?

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

[CRYING]

[SCREAMING]

[CRYING]

No!

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

Oh, please!

Please don't do this to me!

Please!

[CRYING]

- Julia?

[INTENSE MUSIC]

They're never gonna

let you leave.

- Who are they?

- My friends.

- Why? Why would they

do this to me?

- They don't like grown-ups.

- Is it because of this place?

- Do you want me to show you?

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

[BOY GROANING]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[GIRL CRYING]

[SHUDDERING]

[CHILD SCREAMING]

[GROANING]

[INDISTINCT SHOUTING]

[SCREAMING]

[INDISTINCT SHOUTING]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

Some of us tried to run away.

[SIREN WAILING]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

- Where are they taking them?

[WATER RUNNING]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

- The grown-ups lock them

in here to keep them quiet.

They drank the bad water.

When the grown-ups arrived,

it was too late.

- They all died?

- Except for one.

- Mama! Mama!

Mama!

- No! Clara!

- No!

- No! No!

No, my baby!

- Don't do it!

It's not her.

No!

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

[COOPER GRUNTS]

[STREAK GASPING]

We gotta get outta here!

- Let's go, Cooper!

- Ah!

- No! Cooper!

Cooper, no! No! No!

No, Cooper!

Don't let go! No! No!

- Go!

- Cooper! Cooper!

- Don't let go!

- Go! Get..

- Cooper! No!

Cooper!

No!

No! No!

[CRYING]

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

[PANTING]

[RATTLING]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[RATTLING CONTINUES]

[WHOOSHING]

[CRYING]

[SCREAMING]

[CRYING]

[DRAMATIC MUSIC]

[RATTLING]

[WHOOSHING]

[RATTLING CONTINUES]

[WHOOSHING]

[GRUNTS]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

[THUD]

[SCREAMING]

[CRYING]

[THUD]

[CRYING]

No! Please, let me out! Please!

Please let me out!

Please! Please!

Please, let me out.

Let me out! Please!

Please let me out.

Please let me out.

Please. Please.

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

What, what do you,

what do you want?

[CRYING]

Let me see.

It's not your fault.

It's not your fault.

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[CRYING]

It's not your fault.

I love you

just the way you are.

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

I'm gonna go now, okay?

Okay?

Okay.

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[DOOR CREAKING]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[MONITOR BEEPING]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[BEEPING CONTINUES]

[BEEPING INTENSIFIES]

[FLATLINES]

- This patient's been with us

since she was a child.

Stuck in a coma.

Time of death, 8:34.

I'm sorry for your loss,

Mr. Streak.

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

- I'd like a moment

with my daughter.

- Of course.

Take all the time you need.

Follow me, please.

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[INTENSE MUSIC]

[PANTING]

[CRYING]

[GASPING]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC]

[MUSIC CONTINUES]

[EERIE MUSIC]

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