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Synopsis: In this tension-packed thriller, brothers Mike and Tre set out in search of better lives, trying to leave their demons behind for good. After being released from prison for a crime he didn't commit, Mike's only care in the world is to protect his young daughter from an unforgiving ex. But the justice that awaits him on the streets is far worse than anything Mike had experienced in prison. His older brother Tre begrudgingly agrees to one last "delivery", attempting to free Mike and his new girlfriend from the grips of the criminal underworld. What transpires is a wild misadventure where multiple lives unknowingly intersect, and where decisions are made that will haunt everyone forever.
Genre: Drama
Director(s): Kader Ayd
Production: Entertainment One
 
IMDB:
4.2
R
Year:
2013
110 min
36 Views


It's me.

Um...

I've been calling.

I've left a few messages.

Um...

I really want to talk

to you.

I'm starting to get worried,

I haven't heard from you in a while.

Um... Can you call me as soon as

you get this message?

I hope everything's okay.

You know

I love you, right?

(beeping)

IJ"

man:
Hey.

I called you.

And I stopped by

your place.

A little bit of

a stalker, I know.

I have to go back

to work.

What?

I am so confused.

Why?

I've told you.

I mean!!!

Did I-- did

I do something?

- No, not at all, Charles--

- No, not in the slightest bit?

Charles, you want to do

this here at work?

No, I don't want

to do this here at work.

Let's go somewhere,

let's talk.

I just-- I want

to talk to you.

I don't want to talk, Charles,

I've already told you.

What have you told me?

I told you that

I'm going through...

I'm just going through stuff right

now and I really just need space.

It has nothing to

do with you.

Honestly.

Well, are you in-are you in

some kind of trouble?

- What's--

- No, no.

Well, what's

going on with you?

Is there something I can do?

Yeah.

Please, let me know.

- I mean, I'm--

- You can respect me.

What does that mean?

It means to give me

space like I asked.

I really-- I care

about you so much.

I mean!!!

I do, I just-- I can't do

this right now.

Please, just...

I'm really sorry.

Look.

If you...

(signing)

If you need space,

you can have space.

If we're done and that's it...

Then that's what it is.

Which is..

How...

How can you love

somebody like me?

I mean, honestly.

I don't have any

love to give.

How do you...

I'm so sorry.

(door closing)

What about

that cat, Glen, man?

He seemed kinda

shaky, man.

Don't worry about

Glen, he's a little bipolar.

He takes medication for it...

He's a little off.

But he's

always looked out.

Every time Glen's given

me a call, man,

it's always been

about something legit.

I've made a lot of money

with Glen, yo.

Why me?

Why not?

You need the money

just like the rest of us.

Oxsana, Reggie, they need to get

the hell out of the country.

You can't be

doing this, man.

You're gonna be putting me

in a bad situation.

You looked them right

in the eye the other night

and you told them that

you were down.

Are you trying

to get me killed?

You trying to get

yourself killed?

(toilet flushing)

Better be sure.

(door closing)

man:
All right,

y'all, I'm out.

Yo, let me holler at

you for a minute, Mike.

Mike:
What's good, bro?

Man:
You good?

You know, I'm all right.

Looking for work.

You know how

that go.

That's what's up.

You do that.

Look, I gotta

go home and pack.

I'll be gone for a

couple of days.

But when I get back...

I got something that's

gonna make you smile.

Big surprise.

All right?

All right.

You good?

I'm good,

I'm good.

Yo, Pablo!

Would you do

me a favor?

Take him out

and get him a drink.

I mean, he's acting like the world

is on his shoulders,

like it's coming to an end.

I'll be going for couple of days,

when I get back, I want

to see you smiling, Mike.

I got you, man.

Ya'll be safe, all right?

All right.

Your brother's cool, man.

He's all right with me.

(door closing)

So what's up?

What's all this

"unsurity" about?

Huh?

- Why you so doubtful?

- Do you want to know why I'm unsure?

Yeah.

I just got out of jail

for a crime I didn't do.

Man:
Good.

If everything is

what you say it is...

I'm pleased.

IJ"

So you got the money,

you got the map.

The gentleman's

name is El Loco.

I don't want you to give the money

to anyone but him, personally.

So, let me get this straight.

You want me to take the side

road down to Mexicali, the border.

I'm gonna meet with El Loco.

Make the drop.

Sounds easy.

Sounds easy--

don't f*** it up.

- Want some coffee?

- No, thanks.

All right.

Now I want to talk to

you about something.

After this weekend, I'm gonna

need an early retirement.

I'm done.

Where's my letter

of resignation?

My two weeks' notice?

I mean, that's

corporate sh*t.

You see, you know my little

brother got out of prison...

You know, we want to see

the world, we want to travel..

Your little brother...

Do I talk to you

about my family sh*t?

The sh*t in my family that causes

me problems?

Do we ever talk

about that kind of sh*t?

I don't understand-- I mean...

How much money we

made together over the years?

We made a ton of money.

Man:
F*** it.

You make sure you don't

f*** this job up.

All right?

Don't f***

this one up.

We'll talk about your retirement

when you get back.

IJ"

This the spot?

I don't see sh*t.

What you see

down that way?

Man:
That's Mexico,

over there.

Oh, you're

smart now, huh?

Yeah, I know stuff.

Yeah, what you know?

I know that

that's Mexico.

And that they're late.

(sighing)

I can't argue with that.

Did I ever tell you about the story

when I was at Ensenada

and that whore house?

You only tell me every

time we talk about Mexico.

Man, they got them line up,

you just walk in the door...

You pick one--

Well, you pick one..

You know, I pick like

three or four.

Yeah, you're gonna be like

three or four minutes anyway

so what's the difference?

How long are we

supposed to wait, man?

I don't know, but I don't

see nothing, man.

Damn.

Well, we could take

the 500 and just go to Mexico.

(laughil19)

I ever tell you about this

whorehouse in Ensenada--

Here we go!

(laughil19)

Man, we had a good time

down there.

Knowing you, you'll spend the

whole 500K on a whore house in Mexico.

I'd open a new one.

Real classy spot.

Ho, ho, ho, ho, ho...

(gun firing)

What the...

Let me do the talking,

all right?

I hope you

habla espafiol.

IJ"

Which one of you

is El Loco?

Entiendes?

El quiere

pedir para El Loco.

Soy el loco, pero no me

Ilame El Loco.

g Tienes el dinero?

You guys got the money?

Man:
You El Loco?

Come on, t6

tienes el dinero, puto.

Yo, I need to see El Loco,

comprende?

4' Qu quiere?

g Quieres ver El Loco?

Huh?

G Quieres ver El Loco?

0K3)!-

Pis tola.

Yo, Tre, Tre...

What's up, man?

It's good, it's cool,

it's cool, it's cool.

You want to

see El Loco, cooperate.

IA p fires e, ap fires e,

vamos, vamos!

IVamos, vamos, vamos!

(gun firing)

IJ"

I'm El Loco.

(thunder rumbling)

(bills shuffling)

El Loco:
Hey.

Te acuerdas de esos dos

cabrones que no querian pagar.

Oh, Simon?

Venian con una historia

que no s qu pas con el dinero.

Simon.

El Loco:
Cabrones.

Y qu hiciste

to dos los--

Yo no s.

Tre:
Excuse me, I

don't mean to interrupt.

By any chance, you think we could

get a ride back to the car?

It's all there.

We haven't finished

counting the money.

It's all there.

IJ"

gSer que matamos esto, guey?

Our people

are waiting for us.

You're not going

nowhere.

The package

is not ready yet.

Package?

What packae?

W-w-we ...

We transport

dinero.

Understand--

Comprende?

No.

No comprende.

Yo, my man, this supposed

to be a quick in-and-out.

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