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Synopsis: steve&chuma , two criminals are the sole survivors of a terrorist attack at a restaurant in Jerusalem. They decide to change their ways and become flesh and blood angels. They go on a ...
Genre: Comedy, Drama
Director(s): Oded Raz
Production: Firma Films
 
IMDB:
8.4
Year:
2017
100 min
151 Views


in my wildest dreams!

Thank you, Mama, I love you.

My dear son.

Boris, come dance with me.

Don't you dance?

With you, of course.

Yehuda!

Thank you, Steven.

You're our angel.

Where's your friend?

I want to thank him too.

No... that's okay,

he's very busy. I'll tell him.

I want a take away tray

with everything,

three or four of each kind.

And if there's Dragee candies,

make sure they're hard

and no sugared peanuts,

Avisar hates when theystick to the teeth.

I don't think I can...

Believe in yourself.

May I dance with Doniasha?

Go ahead.

Come with me a sec.

- Don't think I didn't see.

- What?

We're here to do a good deed

and you're thinking with your dick.

Didn't we do a good deed?

- What's wrong with you?

- What? I don't get you.

- She's not under age.

- She has a kid!

So?

What's this?

We were at a party at "Star Halls" and...

they serve the best desserts ever.

- So?

- So...

Steve sent these for Avisar.

Avisar likes sweets, right?

Come in already.

Sweet Boris,

he fall asleep with shoes on.

F***ing hell...

This is the last of them.

I'll be right back.

Could you...?

Take this before I finish them all.

I just love their marzipan.

I can always bring more.

Why are you doing this?

I told you, Steve asked me to.

To your health.

Sure.

Here's to you.

Thanks.

Well, I'm off.

You not stay?

No. I can't.

Why?

I can't be reckless.

You know, with Yeltsin here...

Boris.

You know?

Come to the bedroom.

What's wrong?

We shouldn't.

This isn't for real,

- it's the alcohol...

- No it's not.

I mixed drinks and...

Chuma.

I'll be going now.

Listen, I spoke to Magriso

about Kadaev...

Hold on.

Nineteen thousand. Nice.

How did you get him to pay?

He didn't want to at first,

he said he doesn't have money.

I said, what's this?

He said it's for suppliers,

he owes them,

- he wants to shut the place down.

- And?

So I said, 'You don't give, I take."

I opened the cash register,

he went ballistic, I shut him up,

I took the money and came here.

- And he won't talk?

- Not anymore.

"Not anymore?"

I stabbed him with the ice pick,

filled up the bag

and got the hell outta there.

Oh yeah?

- So you finished him...

- Yeah.

I should shoot you like I shot him.

Where do you get these morons?

He killed a man.

He rubs out a source of income

and then comes here with the cops

on his tail.

I told you a thousand times,

idiots and thieves won't work for me.

Okay, scramble him up

and launder the money.

What did Magriso say about Kadaev?

If he got a false passport,

someone else must have done it.

Something stinks here.

A man can't just leave without a trace.

F***.

Okay, get Steve and Chuma back,

their unpaid leave is over.

What's that?

What are you doing?

You idiot.

Get up, I'll make coffee.

Get out of here!

Nothing happened last night,

I swear.

You didn't hook up with her?

- No.

Look me in the eye

and say that again.

I didn't hook up with her.

And I never will.

I'm just as good a person as you,

it upsets me that you think I'm not.

Zadok got back to me.

He took 50/50 off the table.

And the delivery of the trucks is on him.

I'll make you some black coffee.

You're so annoying.

You're telling me

how good you are

and then I gotta hear

about Zadok and the fish kebab?

For f***'s sake...

Why are you such a prude?

Someone has to plan for the future.

Why does that make me

a lesser man?

Fine, you're not.

Let's go to the Wall

and get another note.

Damn it. Well played.

My tranny disguise is in the bathroom,

get yourself an outfit together.

It's your turn.

Make me a strong coffee.

Your leave is over,

Kaslassy wants you guys back.

Where's Steve? He wasn't home.

Can you hear me,

or are you totally deaf?

What?

How are you, Zafuf?

Damn, I'm talking to myself.

The doctor said I need an operation

or I'll lose my hearing for good.

Kaslassy wants you back!

Where's Steve?

Yikes! What's that?

Steve...

Kaslassy wants us back.

Sure thing.

Where do we go?

- What "where?"

- Hold on.

What's going on with you?

With me?

What's with the woman's getup?

This is who I am.

Are you a tranny?

You say that as if it's a curse.

You're not going to collect like that.

Then I'm not collecting.

This is who I am now

and I'm not ashamed of it.

You mean you leave the house like this?

When you're close to death,

you realize that you were hiding

all your life.

I'm done being something that I'm not.

Your brain is fried.

Since when is this?

Always.

What you see on the outside

is not always what happens inside.

Whoever loved me

will love me like this.

Like Chuma.

Dude, you've totally lost it.

So what's your name now?

Renana.

Dude, you stay here.

Ma'am, you stay here...

Fire and brimstone.

Can you go on your own?

F*** me...

Move!

You think he'll let us off the hook?

Hope so.

Otherwise we'll have to split to Jersey.

The name Renana suits you...

What?

You tell me, so you don't say

I'm thinking with my dick...

That one. She's not your type.

"My name is Bruria, daughter of Leah.

Help me and my husband have a child."

"My name is Bruria, daughter of Leah.

Help me and my husband have a child.

I'm 40 years old

and I think it may be too late.

We've been trying for a long time,

I'm afraid he'll leave me."

I think we're done.

What?

We can't make her wish come true.

Only God can do that.

But we read the note,

we came all the way here...

So?

It's a medical problem.

How can you help her?

You'll knock on the door and say what?

We chose this note.

It's a sign that we can help her.

I think it's a different kind of sign.

It's a sign we have to move on.

God sees that we're dwelling

on these notes

instead of taking advantage

of our opportunities.

This note is a wakeup call,

we're not God.

That doesn't sound right.

It can't end this way.

I'm going to buy us plane tickets.

We deserve a life in America.

Don't we?

- You'd leave everything behind?

- Yes.

I don't know.

No pressure.

Tomorrow at four

we go to Sharon's travel agency.

I'll ask Nissim's sister in law

for seats next to the window,together.

We'll fly with Turkish Air,

they serve an awesome Bi-Ajeen.

We'll have a good time.

Let's go, Avisar.

What did Yigal talk to you about?

The game up north.

You didn't tell me about it.

Why did you say

your dad would come?

Because he will, I believe it

and it will happen.

You're right.

If you believe, it happens.

So you should believe too.

I do, Avisar, but...

Don't you want him to come?

I do...

I want you to have a dad.

You deserve a dad.

- But I have a dad.

- I know, but I want a good man.

Someone we'll both love...

Then he won't be my dad.

He'll be better than your dad,

because we'll pick him and he'll pick you.

Chuma...

What are you doing here?

It's Tuesday, soccer practice...

Is everything all right?

Yes.

I was at the bakery,

I thought you might be hungry.

I got you your favorite,

with spinach.

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