Murder Eleven Page #2

Synopsis: Ten murders, two cops, and one killer... or so they think.
Director(s): Jim Klock
Production: Indican Pictures
 
IMDB:
4.1
R
Year:
2013
90 min
28 Views


LISTEN TO ME. STOP!

OW!

LISTEN TO ME!

CALM DOWN!

OKAY?

JUST LET ME EXPLAIN.

AAH!

LET ME EXPLAIN.

GET OFF OF ME!

STOP! JUST --

GET THE F*** OFF ME!

SAM.

SAMANTHA.

[ PANTING ]

SAM.

SAM, DON'T DO THIS, OKAY?

JUST LET ME IN THE DOOR.

[ BANGS DOOR ]

OPEN THE F***ING DOOR.

[ SOBS ]

SAM...

PLEASE,

JUST TALK TO ME, OKAY?

PLEASE, TALK TO ME.

[ TELEPHONE BEEPS ]

[ Dial tone ]

[ TELEPHONE BEEPS ]

SAM, DON'T MAKE

THIS CALL.

PUT THE PHONE DOWN,

OKAY?

YOU MAKE THIS CALL,

AND THERE'S NO GOING BACK.

PUT THE F***ING PHONE

DOWN, SAM!

[ BREATHES SHAKILY ]

[ SOBS ]

BABY, I KNOW YOUR MIND

IS RUNNING:

ABOUT A THOUSAND MILES

A MINUTE,

AND I AM SORRY:

THAT YOU HAD TO SEE THIS.

I'M SORRY YOU HAD TO FIND OU THIS WAY, OKAY?

PLEASE, JUST LET ME

TALK YOU THROUGH THIS.

YOU'RE PLANNING ON TALKING ME

THROUGH THIS?!

IF YOU CAN REMAIN CALM

AND BE OPEN TO WHA I HAVE TO SAY, YES.

YOU'VE GOT A STRANGE WHITE WOMAN

TIED UP IN OUR GARAGE!

I UNDERSTAND THAT.

JUST LET ME STAR AT THE BEGINNING

AND TELL YOU:

EVERYTHING, OKAY?

DO YOU RAPE THEM?

NO.

NO. GOD, NO.

IT'S NOT LIKE THAT.

THEN WHAT'S IT LIKE,

RICHARD?

IT'S DIFFICULT TO EXPLAIN

IN WORDS.

WHAT ARE YOU GONNA DO

WITH THAT WOMAN?

I'M GOING TO KILL HER.

[ WHIMPERS ]

I'M SORRY --

THERE IS A DEMON INSIDE OF ME.

ONE THAT I HAVE FOUGH FOR YEARS --

ONE I THOUGHT I KILLED

AND I BURIED A LONG TIME AGO...

...THE DAY I MET YOU.

'CAUSE YOU SHOWED ME

THAT THERE WAS A LOVE

THAT I NEVER KNEW EXISTED.

THEN WE STARTED:

OUR FAMILY, OKAY?

I NEVER THOUGH I'D GO BACK THERE...

BUT IT HIT ME AGAIN...

AND I LOST CONTROL.

SO, WHAT, YOU JUST DECIDED

TO DESTROY OUR FAMILY?!

I DON'T WANT TO DESTROY

OUR FAMILY.

I'D NEVER DO ANYTHING

INTENTIONALLY TO HURT YOU.

I DON'T GIVE A DAMN

ABOUT YOUR INTENTIONS!

I CARE ABOUT YOUR ACTIONS!

[ Voice breaking ]

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

OKAY, YOU WANT TO KNOW?

HUH?

A FEW WEEKS AGO,

I'M AT THE JOB SITE,

AND THERE'S

THESE DISGUSTING WHORES

WORKING THE CORNERS,

SHOWING ME THEIR TITS,

TELLING ME TO COME GE WHAT MY WIFE DOESN'T GIVE ME.

YEAH.

YEAH, IT TOOK ME BACK TO A PLACE

THAT I'D LEFT A LONG TIME AGO --

A PLACE THAT I NEVER THOUGH I'D RETURN, BUT I DID.

AND YOU KNOW WHAT?

IT MADE ME WANT TO KILL AGAIN!

SO I F***ING DID!

SO YOU'RE THE ONE

KILLING ALL THOSE PROSTITUTES?

YES.

YES, I AM.

I'M SORRY.

I KNOW THAT SOUNDS HORRIBLE.

[ DOOR HINGES CREAKING ]

DO YOU SLEEP WITH THEM

BEFORE YOU KILL THEM?

NO, BABY.

DON'T LIE TO ME, RICHARD.

I'M NOT LYING.

I'D NEVER CHEAT ON YOU.

SO THIS ISN'T SOME

SICK SEXUAL FETISH YOU HAVE?

I WOULD NEVER HURT YOU

LIKE THAT. NEVER.

[ SCOFFS ]

BUT YOU'D HURT ME

LIKE THIS?

YOU'D HUR OUR FAMILY LIKE THIS?

Mayfield:
ALL RIGHT...

MAYBE IT'S ME.

I'M MISSING SOMETHING.

DID YOU FIND ANYTHING

IN THAT CASE FILE

THAT, UH,

LINKS THESE GIRLS?

NO. [ SIGHS ]

NOTHING.

EXCEP THEY'RE ALL PROSTITUTES.

WHY KILL THEM?

THAT'S WHAT I DON'T UNDERSTAND.

EASY TARGETS.

EASY TO GET AWAY WITH.

YOU KNOW, WHEN YOU CONSIDER

THE NUMBER OF PROSTITUTES

IN THIS CITY:

AND THAT EVERY JOHN

THEY'VE BEEN WITH

AND PIMP THEY'VE WORKED FOR

IS A SUSPECT,

THE ODDS ARE CLEARLY

IN THE KILLER'S FAVOR.

MOST OF THESE GIRLS

DON'T EVEN HAVE FAMILY,

AND THE FRIENDS THEY KEEP

ARE OTHER PROSTITUTES

WHO DON'T WANT TO GE INVOLVED.

SOME POLITICIANS

DON'T GIVE A DAMN.

THERE'S NO "MOTHERS AGAINS DEAD PROSTITUTES"

MAKING A STINK.

SO, WHAT?

THIS GUY JUST KILLS THESE GIRLS

BECAUSE IT'S EASY?

WHY NOT? YEAH, MAYBE THAT'S

THE ONLY MOTIVE.

WHAT IF HE'S THAT SICK?

[ CELLPHONE RINGS ]

IT'S JESSE.

YEAH, WHAT HAVE YOU GOT?

OKAY.

OKAY. GOOD.

YEAH, YOU GOT A FAVOR

ON THE BOOKS.

YOU BE SAFE.

WHAT YOU GOT?

THERE IS A SERVICE OPERATED

BY A PIMP OUT OF PHILLY.

HE COMES DOWN EVERY WEEKEND

WITH A GROUP OF GIRLS,

SETS THEM UP AT A MOTEL

SOMEWHERE OFF ROUTE 40,

AND THEN HE USES ONLINE

CHAT ROOMS AND WEBSITES

TO SET THEM UP:

WITH THEIR DATES.

A FEW OF THE VICTIMS

HAD PRIORS IN PHILLY.

YEAH, BUT HE OPERATES THIS

LOCALLY, AS WELL.

HE SETS THE GIRLS UP

AT PUBS, CLUBS,

CASINOS, HOTELS, MOTELS --

EVERYWHERE.

THERE'S THE VARIETY.

YEAH, BUT IF YOU'RE A PIMP,

YOU'RE GONNA KNOW

IF Y-YOUR GIRLS ARE

GOING MISSING, FOR GOD'S SAKE.

ALL RIGHT.

LET'S THINK OUTSIDE THE BOX.

WHAT IF HE'S LESS OF A PIMP

AND MORE OF AN AGENT?

OKAY.

OPERATES OUT OF SEVERAL CITIES

WITH SEVERAL HUNDRED GIRLS.

NUMBERS GAME.

SO, HE'S RUNNING A HUGE SYSTEM

OF PROSTITUTION:

UP AND DOWN:

THE EAST COAST.

IF HE LOSES A GIRL

HERE OR THERE,

HE DOESN'T EVEN NOTICE.

BECAUSE IT'S A NETWORK.

I'VE WANTED TO TELL YOU

FOR SO LONG.

KEEPING A SECRET FROM YOU

IS HELL ON ME.

WHY DIDN'T YOU COME TO ME

WHEN THE URGES RETURNED?

BEFORE YOU STARTED

MURDERING WOMEN?

I CONTROLLED THE URGES

AT FIRST.

YOU KNOW, THEY'D COME AND GO,

AND I DEAL WITH THEM MYSELF.

THEN ONE DAY,

I WAS LEAVING WORK,

AND ONE OF THEM WHORES

WALKED UP TO MY CAR WINDOW.

THEN WHAT?

SHE TOLD ME I COULD F*** HER

FOR $20.

WHAT HAPPENED NEXT?

I, UM...

I GRABBED HER.

UM...

SHOW ME.

WHAT?

IF I'VE BEEN MARRIED TO

A MONSTER AFTER ALL THESE YEARS,

I WANT TO SEE IT.

I'M NOT A MONSTER.

MAYBE AT TIMES, I CAN BE,

OR PART OF ME CAN BE.

THEN SHOW ME:

THAT PART OF YOU.

I DON'T WANT YOU

TO SEE THAT.

SHOW ME.

NO.

SHOW ME!

I DON'T WANT YOU

TO SEE IT.

SHOW --

I GRABBED THAT C*NT WHORE

BY THE BACK OF THE HEAD,

DRAGGED HER ASS:

INTO MY CAR,

DROVE DOWN THE ROAD

AT 60 MILES PER HOUR

AS I BASHED HER F***ING HEAD

INTO THE DASHBOARD!

AND THEN I PULLED OVER,

SNAPPED HER NECK

LIKE A F***ING TWIG...

[ GASPING ]

...AND LEFT HER ASS

ON THE SIDE OF THE ROAD.

[ INHALES DEEPLY ]

[ COUGHS ]

[ SIGHS ]

I CAN'T IMAGINE

WHAT YOU THINK OF ME.

ALL I CAN DO IS BEG

FOR YOUR FORGIVENESS.

HOW CAN I EVEN CONTEMPLATE

FORGIVING YOU...

OR EVEN:

UNDERSTANDING YOU...

WHEN I DON'T EVEN KNOW

WHO YOU ARE?

DON'T SAY THAT.

YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE

IN THIS WORLD:

THAT TRULY KNOWS WHO I AM.

WE'VE BEEN TOGETHER

SINCE WE WERE 18 YEARS OLD.

I HAVE NEVER LOVED ANYONE

OR ANYTHING:

AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU

AND OUR TWO KIDS.

HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO

FEEL NOW, HUH?

HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO

REACT?

HOW DO I GO ON:

FROM THIS?

I NEED YOU.

I NEED YOU TO HELP ME.

GOD, THIS CAN'T BE

HAPPENING.

NOW ALL WE HAVE TO DO

IS FIGURE OUT WHICH ROOMS.

I HOPE WE'RE NO TOO LATE.

Jesse:
YEP.

'CAUSE IF HE ALREADY

HAS HER...

[ SIGHS ]

WELL,

THEN SHE'S ALREADY DEAD.

OR CLOSE TO IT.

[ SIGHS ]

I THINK WE FOUND

OUR ROOM.

I-I KNOW YOU'RE AFRAID.

I AM MORE THAN JUST AFRAID.

I AM SCARED TO DEATH.

TONIGHT WAS GONNA BE

THE LAST NIGHT.

THIS WAS GONNA BE

THE LAST GIRL, I SWEAR.

HOW CAN YOU SWEAR

TO ANYTHING:

WHEN YOU SAY YOU CAN'T EVEN

CONTROL IT YOURSELF?

THAT'S WHY

I BROUGHT HER HERE.

I-I KNEW

I NEEDED TO DO SOMETHING

THAT WOULD HIT ME

IN THE FACE --

SOMETHING TO MAKE THIS REAL,

SOMETHING TO HIT HOME.

WHY?

I DIDN'T HAVE THE STRENGTH

TO TELL YOU, AND...

I HAD TO DO SOMETHING THAT WOULD

TRIGGER ME TO WANT TO CHANGE.

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