Murder Eleven Page #3

Synopsis: Ten murders, two cops, and one killer... or so they think.
Director(s): Jim Klock
Production: Indican Pictures
 
IMDB:
4.1
R
Year:
2013
90 min
28 Views


NO.

NO -- WHY DO YOU

KILL PROSTITUTES?

WHY DO YOU HATE THEM

SO MUCH?

[ SIGHS ]

THANK YOU, MISS.

YOU BE SAFE, OKAY?

I WANT YOU TO GET US A ROOM.

THAT CORNER ROOM

OR ONE LIKE IT.

THEN SPEAK TO:

THE OTHER GIRL IN 115.

I'LL BE IN TOUCH

WITH STREET CRIMES

AND GET US:

SURVEILLANCE ASSISTANCE.

AND YOU'LL TELL DISPATCH TO KEEP

LOCAL UNITS OUT OF HERE

SO THEY DON' SPOOK ANYONE.

LISTEN, DON'T I.D. YOURSELF

FOR THE HOTEL CLERK.

WHY?

WELL, OUR KILLER

COULD CALL FIRST,

PRETEND TO BE:

POLICE DISPATCH,

AND INQUIRE ABOUT THE OFFICERS

WORKING TONIGHT.

IT'S AN OLD TRICK

TO SPOT SURVEILLANCE.

RIGHT, AND THE CLERK,

KNOWING NO BETTER

JUST PASSES HIM STRAIGH THROUGH TO OUR ROOM.

I GET IT.

HE'S BEEN BETTER THAN US

EVERY STEP OF THE WAY.

LET'S BE BETTER

THAN HIM TONIGHT.

THERE ARE THINGS YOU DON'T KNOW

ABOUT MY CHILDHOOD...

...THINGS I'M AFRAID

TO TELL YOU.

Samantha:
I KNOW YOU HAD

A TOUGH LIFE GROWING UP --

BOUNCING AROUND:

FROM FOSTER HOMES.

CAN'T IMAGINE WHAT HELL

THAT WAS LIKE.

BUT YOU KNOW:

HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU.

YOU CAN TELL ME ANYTHING.

EVERYTHING ABOUT ME

IS A LIE.

WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?

I'VE LIED SO OFTEN,

I DON'T --

I DON'T KNOW

WHAT THE TRUTH IS ANYMORE.

LIES ABOUT WHO I AM,

WHERE I'M FROM.

I CAN'T KEEP TRACK.

JUST TELL ME EVERYTHING,

OKAY?

I CAN'T HELP YOU UNLESS I KNOW

WHAT'S GOING ON INSIDE YOU.

MAKE ME UNDERSTAND.

I DIDN'T GROW UP

IN FOSTER HOMES.

I WOULD'VE BEEN

BETTER OFF IF I DID.

BUT I MET YOUR FOSTER PARENTS

IN COLLEGE.

NO,

I JUST CALLED THEM THAT.

THEY WERE A COUPLE TEACHERS

FROM HIGH SCHOOL

WHO TOOK INTEREST IN ME,

HELPED ME THROUGH COLLEGE.

WHAT ABOU YOUR REAL FAMILY?

MY MOM WAS A STRIPPER...

AND MY DAD WAS JUST SOME DUDE

PASSING THROUGH DALLAS.

I DID ASK HER ONCE,

YOU KNOW [CHUCKLES]

"WHY NOT JUST ABORT ME?

IT'D HAVE BEEN EASIER."

WHAT'D SHE SAY?

JESUS TOLD HER NOT TO.

DID SHE GO BACK TO STRIPPING

AFTER YOU WERE BORN?

NOT MUCH ELSE SHE COULD DO.

SINGLE MOTHER,

HIGH-SCHOOL DROPOUT --

WHAT ELSE IS THERE?

THAT'S A TOUGH WAY

TO RAISE A KID.

THEN, WHEN I'M 8 YEARS OLD,

AFTER A STRING:

OF A**HOLE BOYFRIENDS,

SHE MEETS DARNELL --

IN A.A., OF ALL PLACES.

SHE WAS A DRUNK?

HARD TO TAKE OFF

ALL YOUR CLOTHES

FOR A BUNCH OF STRANGE MEN.

WHAT STARTED OU AS MEDICINE FOR HER SHIF BECAME MEDICINE FOR LIFE.

BUT SHE DECIDED:

TO GET HELP, THOUGH.

[ CHUCKLES ]

NO. NO.

SHE GOT POPPED:

FOR HER THIRD D.U.I.

IT WAS COURT-ORDERED A.A.

AND...

DARNELL WAS A RECOVERING

ALCOHOLIC SHE MET IN A.A.?

NO.

HE WAS THE F***ING ANTICHRIST.

NO, HE WAS

THIS DRUG-PUSHING PIMP

THAT LIKED TO HAWK

N.A. AND A.A. MEETINGS,

LOOKING FOR YOUNG GIRLS,

YOUNG PROSPECTS,

ONES THAT WERE:

TRYING TO GET HELP.

YOU KNOW, ONES LOOKING

TO BETTER THEMSELVES,

EXCEPT HE WANTED

TO INTRODUCE THEM

TO A WORLD OF CRACK COCAINE

AND DISGUSTING MEN.

THIS IS EARLY '80s, SO NO ONE

KNEW ABOUT CRACK COCAINE THEN.

NO ONE KNEW HOW THAT SNAKE BIT,

AND IT BIT MY MOM HARD.

'CAUSE SHE'D HAVE BEEN

BETTER OFF TO DIE

THE FIRST TIME SHE EVER STUCK

THAT GLASS COCK IN HER MOUTH,

BUT SHE DIDN'T.

NO, THAT POISON JUST KILLED HER

A LITTLE BIT EVERY DAY,

BIT BY BIT, ROCK BY ROCK.

THEN, ONE DAY, I'M 14 YEARS OLD,

AND I COME HOME FROM SCHOOL,

AND THERE'S 10 DUDES

LINED UP TAKING TURNS

ON MY MOM:

IN THE LIVING ROOM.

DARNELL --

HE'S SITTING ON MY BEANBAG,

EATING CHICKEN TENDERS,

LOOKS UP AT ME AND SAYS,

"HEY, LITTLE MAN,

I GOT YOU A CHEESEBURGER,

"BUT I ATE YOUR FRIES.

I ATE YOUR FRIES."

THAT'S WHAT HE SAYS.

AND THEN MY --

I LOOKED DOWN,

MY MOM'S GETTING RAMMED

BY SOME FAT JHERI-CURL

MOTHERF***ER.

SHE SAYS TO ME,

"HEY, BABY, GET MY CRACK PIPE.

GET ME MY CRACK PIPE."

[ SCOFFS ]

SO I DID.

I WALKED OVER TO THE COUNTER,

AND I GOT THE CRACK PIPE.

I WALKED BACK OVER

TO MY MAMA --

FAT F***, HE'S STILL

GOING TO TOWN ON HER.

I PUT IT IN HER MOUTH

AND LIGHT IT,

WATCH HER INGEST IT DEEP INSIDE,

EYES ROLL:

IN THE BACK OF HER HEAD

AS SHE JUST DRIFTS AWAY.

[ INHALES DEEPLY ]

AND THEN I PULLED OU A .38 PISTOL

I STOLE FROM DARNELL'S HOUSE,

AND I SHOT MY MOTHER

RIGHT BETWEEN THE EYES,

TURNED AROUND, SHOT THA FAT F*** TWICE IN THE CHEST,

AND OLD DARNELL:

LAUNCHES AT ME,

AND I SHOOT THAT MOTHERF***ER

RIGHT IN THE MOUTH.

COPS HAD TO PULL HIS TEETH

OUT OF THE DRYWALL.

GOD, IT MAKES ME FEEL GOOD!

BABY, I...

I HAD NO IDEA.

WHY DIDN'T YOU

TELL ME THIS BEFORE?

I COULD'VE HELPED YOU.

WE COULD'VE

GONE THROUGH THIS TOGETHER.

SAM, YOU DID HELP ME.

YOU'VE DONE NOTHING

BUT LOVE ME.

ME -- YOU GAVE ME THE GREATES GIFT IN THIS ENTIRE WORLD

WITH OUR TWO:

BEAUTIFUL CHILDREN.

I LET THIS HATE:

MANIFEST INSIDE OF ME.

I LET EVIL WIN.

NOT YOU.

I DID THIS.

BUT IT DOESN'T HAVE TO

WIN TONIGHT.

Woman:

[ MUFFLED SHOUTING ]

WE SHOULD GO CHECK ON HER,

MAKE SURE SHE'S OKAY.

I'M GONNA BRING HER

SOME WATER.

NO.

NO, I NEED TO

TAKE CARE OF THIS.

I WANT TO BRING HER

SOME WATER.

I WANT TO MAKE SURE

SHE'S OKAY.

WE ARE NOT GONNA HUR THIS GIRL.

YEAH.

YEAH, LOOK,

I UNDERSTAND THAT, SIR, BUT --

I KNOW YOU NEED OUR CAPTAIN'S

APPROVAL, SIR,

BUT HE'S NOT AVAILABLE

TO GIVE IT,

AND WE NEED THOSE EXTRA

SURVEILLANCE UNITS

AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

WE'VE LEFT WORD,

AND SO HAS DISPATCH.

[ SIGHS ]

ALL RIGHT.

LET ME KNOW.

[ CELLPHONE BEEPS ]

HE'S WORKING ON IT.

YEAH, I'M SURE HE IS.

WE GOT FOUR GIRLS

WHO COME IN FROM PHILLY.

TWO WORK STRIP CLUBS

EVERY WEEKEND,

AND TWO WORK HOTELS.

RIGHT.

AND ONE GIRL USES A SERVICE

TO SET UP HER DATES ONLINE,

AND SHE'S GO SOME REGULARS.

NOW, OUR GIRL IN 115

SET UP HER DATE HERSELF.

SHE DIDN'T -- SHE DIDN' USE THE SERVICE.

RIGHT -- I MEAN, THE WEBSITE'S

RUN BY THE SERVICE,

BUT TONIGHT'S DATE,

SHE...

YEAH, SHE MADE THA HERSELF.

AND IT DIDN'T BOTHER HER

TO HAVE TO TRAVEL TO HIM?

NO. WHY WOULD IT?

SHE'S TRAVELED A HUNDRED TIMES

BEFORE WITH THE SERVICE.

AND, YOU KNOW WHAT?

SHE PROBABLY TIED IN

A FEE, AS WELL.

AND NONE OF THESE GIRLS

KNOW EACH OTHER?

WELL,

THE GIRL IN 115 SAID

SHE RECOGNIZED:

ONE OF THE GIRLS IN THE VAN,

BUT SHE JUST WENT ON

TO A CLUB DOWNTOWN.

AND THE FRIEND THAT USUALLY

TRAVELS WITH HER

THIS TIME DID NOT.

NOT TONIGHT, NO.

SHE BOOKED A SEPARATE DATE

AND LEFT BY TRAIN IN

THE EARLY HOURS THIS MORNING.

SHE SAY WHERE?

YEAH, SHE DID.

UM...NEWARK.

IT'S STARTING TO MAKE

A LITTLE SENSE.

THESE GIRLS:

SEE JOBS POSTED ONLINE

FOR A SH*T-TON OF MONEY

FOR A NON-SEXUAL ENCOUNTER.

AND "NON-SEXUAL ENCOUNTER"

USUALLY MEANS NICE OLD MEN

WHO CAN'T GET IT UP ANYMORE

WHO'VE GOT A LOT OF MONEY

TO PAY FOR WOMEN BECAUSE

THEY'RE YOUNG AND HOT.

WHAT HARD-UP WORKING GIRL

WOULD SAY NO?

NOT MANY.

BUT, OF COURSE,

THEY HAVE NO IDEA

HOW EASY THEY'RE MAKING I FOR HIM.

HE DAMN SURE KNOWS HOW HARD

HE'S MAKING IT FOR US.

YOU CAN COUNT ON THAT.

[ SNIFFLES ]

[ WHIMPERING ]

[ INHALES DEEPLY ]

[ PANTING ]

OH, PLEASE, HELP ME.

PLEASE, I GOT A KID.

I HAVE A LITTLE BOY.

PLEASE, DON'T HURT ME.

Samantha:

NO, NO, IT'S OKAY.

PLEASE.

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