Murder Eleven Page #4

Synopsis: Ten murders, two cops, and one killer... or so they think.
Director(s): Jim Klock
Production: Indican Pictures
 
IMDB:
4.1
R
Year:
2013
90 min
28 Views


IT'S OKAY.

NO, NO, NOBODY'S

GONNA HURT YOU, OKAY?

MY -- MY WRISTS REALLY HURT.

CAN YOU UNTIE ME?

[ SNIFFLES ]

YEAH, SURE.

THANKS.

[ PANTING ]

Richard:
STOP.

NO.

NO, SHE'S BEEN DOWN HERE

FOR HOURS, AND HER WRISTS HURT.

STOP DOING THAT.

MISTER, PLEASE.

I WON'T SAY A WORD.

PLEASE. PLEA--

SHUT YOUR MOUTH:

BEFORE I SHUT IT FOR YOU.

OH, NO, YOU WILL NOT.

YOU ARE NO GONNA HURT THIS GIRL.

LOOK AT ME, RICHARD.

[ SNAPS FINGERS ]

LOOK AT ME.

NOT THIS ONE, OKAY?

YOU'RE GONNA LE THIS ONE GO.

NO.

IF YOU LOVE OUR FAMILY,

YOU HAVE TO LET HER GO.

IT IS BECAUSE I LOVE OUR FAMILY

THAT I WILL NOT LET HER GO.

SHE'S NOT GONNA

SAY ANYTHING.

I-I PROMISE.

I-I-I'LL DISAPPEAR.

YOU'LL NEVER HEAR FROM ME AGAIN.

I'LL BE GONE.

PLEASE, NO! PLEASE!

[ WHIMPERING ]

Shh!

LOOK. HEY. HEY.

LOOK AT ME.

YOU KNOW SHE'LL TELL.

WITHIN HOURS:

OF LETTING HER GO,

THE COPS WILL KNOCK DOWN

THAT DOOR:

AND TAKE ME AWAY FOREVER.

YOU'LL HAVE TO SPEND

WHAT SAVINGS WE HAVE

TO KEEP ME OFF DEATH ROW.

YOU'LL HAVE TO SELL THIS HOUSE,

EVERYTHING WE OWN,

CHANGE YOUR NAME,

MOVE AWAY.

EVERYTHING WE'VE BUILT,

ALL THAT WE HAVE,

WILL BE GONE:

HOURS AFTER I LET HER GO.

[ Voice breaking ]

SO, WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?

THAT THE ONLY OPTION WE HAVE

IS TO KILL HER?

THE ONLY OPTION I HAVE

IS TO KILL HER.

HOW DO YOU PLAN:

ON DOING IT, HUH?

HOW DO YOU KILL THEM?

HOW WERE YOU:

PLANNING ON...

DISPOSING OF HER BODY

BEFORE I GOT HOME?

TELL ME THAT, MY LOVE...

MY WONDERFUL HUSBAND...

...MY BEST FRIEND.

I'M GOING TO STRANGLE HER

WITH A BELT.

I'LL THEN TAKE HER BODY

TO THE BACK OF THE PROPERTY,

RUN HER THROUGH:

THE WOOD CHIPPER.

THEN I'LL COLLEC WHAT'S LEFT OF HER,

PLACE I INTO A GARBAGE BAG,

AND LATER, WHEN I GO

TO PICK UP THE KIDS,

I'LL THROW IT IN A DUMPSTER

BEHIND D.J.'s PIZZA.

[ SOBS, SNIFFLES ]

YOU ARE NOT THIS PERSON.

I'VE LOVED YOU

MY ENTIRE ADULT LIFE,

AND...

AND THIS ISN'T YOU.

THE MAN I LOVE...

THE MAN WHO LOVES ME...

...HE WOULDN'T THINK

THESE THINGS.

HE WOULDN'T...

HE WOULDN'T DO

THESE HORRIBLE THINGS.

WE ALL HAVE A DARK SIDE.

YOU'RE JUST NOW

SEEING MINE.

I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU,

BUT YOU GOT TO HELP YOURSELF.

NO, I WARNED YOU

IT WOULD BE LIKE THIS

IF YOU GOT CARRIED AWAY

WITH THIS SH*T.

ARE YOU EVEN:

F***ING LISTENING TO ME?!

MONICA -- NO, DON'T DO THAT.

NO, DON'T DO IT.

DON'T BE SO F***ING STUPID.

DON'T DO IT.

F***!

[ CLATTERING ]

[ SIGHS ]

[ SIGHS ]

[ EXHALES SHARPLY ]

YOU ALL RIGHT?

I'M FINE.

HOW LONG HAS THA BEEN AN ISSUE?

[ SCOFFS ]

WHAT?

I THOUGHT WE SAID

WE WERE GONNA CUT THE SH*T.

[ SIGHS ]

A WHILE NOW.

THAT'S WHY YOU LEF NARCOTICS?

SHE GOT LOCKED UP

IN THAT WHOLE PHARMACY MESS,

AND NO ONE REALLY WANTED

TO TRUST ME AFTER THAT.

THEY FIGURED:

YOUR WIFE'S ON DOPE,

SO YOU MUST BE, AS WELL --

THAT IT?

[ SIGHS ]

I GUESS SO.

ARE YOU?

[ SCOFFS ]

ARE YOU STILL F***ING

YOUR INFORMANTS?

NOT SINCE I MARRIED ONE.

I'M SORRY.

THAT WAS OUT OF LINE.

I KNOW IT WAS.

I'M SORRY.

THAT'S WHY YOU WANTED

TO PARTNER WITH ME, ISN'T IT?

WHAT DO YOU MEAN?

YOU FIGURED I'D KNOW WHAT IT IS

TO WALK IN YOUR SHOES A LITTLE.

I'D GIVE YOU ROOM,

NOT ASK TOO MANY QUESTIONS

OR JUDGE TOO HARSHLY.

[ CHUCKLES ]

IF I WERE IN YOUR SHOES...

...I'D HAVE DONE

THE SAME THING.

[ SIGHS ]

EVERYBODY HAS SECRETS.

EVERYBODY MAKES MISTAKES.

IT'S HOW WE DEAL WITH THEM

THAT DETERMINES WHO WE ARE.

THE KEY IS TO LIMI MISTAKES OF CHARACTER.

AND AS THE ONE MAN I KNOW

WHO WALKED THIS EARTH

SIN-FREE ONCE SAID,

"DON'T JUDGE

UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE JUDGED."

I WON'T JUDGE YOU.

WELL,

FOR WHAT IT'S WORTH...

I ASKED IF I COULD

PARTNER WITH YOU

BECAUSE I HEARD YOU WERE

THE BEST DETECTIVE THERE WAS.

CAPTAIN WANTS TO PULL ME

OFF THE CASE.

SAYS I'M MAKING IT PERSONAL.

ARE YOU?

I DON'T CARE WHAT PEOPLE SAY

BEHIND MY BACK,

AND I DON'T CARE

WHAT THE CAPTAIN THINKS.

MY WIFE WAS MY INFORMANT.

SHE WAS A PROSTITUTE.

I KNEW RIGHT AWAY

SHE DIDN'T WANT THAT LIFE.

SHE WAS NEW TO THIS COUNTRY,

COULD BARELY SPEAK THE LANGUAGE,

HAD NO JOB SKILLS.

SHE NEEDED HELP.

WE BECAME FRIENDS,

AND WE FELL IN LOVE,

AND I'M NOT ASHAMED

TO ADMIT THAT.

I'M NOT ASHAMED ONE BIT.

WE'VE BEEN MARRIED FOR 10 YEARS.

WE'VE GOT THREE BEAUTIFUL KIDS.

AND SHE GETS ME.

[ CHUCKLES ]

SHE GETS ME.

[ SIGHS ] SO, YOU'RE DAMN RIGHT.

IT IS PERSONAL.

NO ONE DESERVES:

WHAT'S HAPPENING TO THESE GIRLS.

NO ONE.

YOU KNOW THIS IS WRONG,

RIGHT?

I NEVER SAID:

IT WAS RIGHT...

BUT IT'S JUST.

[ SCOFFS ]

NO, LOVE IS JUST.

LOVE CAN'T MAKE SOMEONE

CHANGE WHAT THEY ARE.

MAYBE NOT.

BUT IF YOU:

LOVE SOMEONE ENOUGH,

MAYBE THEY'LL

WANT TO CHANGE.

I LOVED MY MOM:

MORE THAN ANYTHING.

SOMEONE'S LOVED

THESE GIRLS.

THAT'S NOT WHAT MAKES THEM

CHOOSE THE LIFESTYLE.

THEY CHOOSE I BECAUSE THEY ARE WEAK.

WELL...

WELL, MAYBE,

IF YOU LET HER GO...

...AND SHE SEES

YOUR KINDNESS AND TRUST...

...IT'LL CHANGE HER LIFE.

MAYBE SHE'LL

BECOME STRONG.

AND MAYBE SHE'LL DECIDE

TO CHANGE WHO SHE IS.

AND MAYBE SHE GOES TO THE COPS,

AND WE LOSE IT ALL.

NO. NO.

I DON'T THINK SHE WILL.

IS IT WORTH THE RISK?

AT THE END OF THE DAY,

IS SHE WORTH THE RISK --

TO LOSE EVERYTHING

BECAUSE YOU BELIEVE

SHE'S GONNA CHANGE

WHAT SHE IS?

SHE'S A WHORE, AND SHE'S ALWAYS

GONNA BE A WHORE.

DON'T TALK LIKE THAT.

YOU DON'T THINK

HAVING HER DOWN HERE,

PLANNING TO DO WHAT YOU'RE GONNA

DO TO HER IS ENOUGH?

YOU GOT TO THROW INSULTS

AT HER?

YOU DON'T THINK SHE KNOWS

WHO SHE IS?

YOU THINK,

AS SHE SITS HERE...

...AND SHE LISTENS

TO THAT GARBAGE,

SHE'S FORGETTING

WHAT GOT HER HERE?

NOT FOR ONE SECOND.

I BET SHE HASN' STOPPED THINKING ABOUT IT.

I BET YOU THAT,

AS SHE SITS HERE,

AND SHE PRAYS TO A GOD

SHE MAY OR MAY NOT BELIEVE IN...

TO SPARE HER LIFE SO SHE CAN

GET BACK TO HER LITTLE BOY.

SHE'S PROMISING HIM THA SHE'S GONNA CHANGE HER LIFE...

...AND SHE'S GONNA

GET OFF THE STREETS...

...AND SHE'S GONNA

GET OFF THE DRUGS.

SHE'S GONNA

TURN HER LIFE AROUND.

I BET YOU...

THAT SHE HAS MADE JUST ABOU EVERY PROMISE THAT THERE IS.

HAVEN'T YOU?

[ SNIFFLES ]

I KNOW YOU HAVE.

'CAUSE I'VE BEEN PRAYING

FOR THE SAME THING.

DON'T YOU SIT THERE

AND TELL ME:

THAT THIS GIRL'S

GONNA GO TO THE POLICE.

NO, PEOPLE

ARE BROUGHT TO THE LIGH IN SO MANY DIFFERENT WAYS.

[ CHUCKLES ]

MAYBE -- MAYBE THE BLESSING

IN DISGUISE HERE IS THAT, UH --

IS THAT YOU BROUGHT HER

TO THE LIGHT...

THAT WE'VE, TOGETHER,

LED HER TO THE LIGHT.

Richard:

YOU ARE SO BEAUTIFUL.

ALWAYS THE PROTECTOR.

ALWAYS THE MOTHER.

[ WHIMPERS ]

MAYBE SHE NEVER HAD ANYONE

STAND UP FOR HER.

NO MOM OR DAD:

TO SHOW HER THE WAY.

MAYBE SHE DID,

AND SHE SAID,

"F*** IT. I WANT TO

GET HIGH AND WHORE."

OW.

DON'T EVER

DO THAT AGAIN.

LET GO OF ME.

I AM NOT SAYING THESE THINGS

TO BE MEAN.

I AM CALLING HER

WHAT SHE IS:

SO YOU CAN WRAP YOUR HEAD

AROUND THE FAC THAT SHE IS TRASH.

[ Voice breaking ]

YOU'RE HURTING ME.

OW!

DO YOU WANT TO LOSE YOUR HOME

TO FILTH?

NO, BUT I DON'T THINK

WE HAVE TO LOSE ANYTHING.

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