Murder Eleven Page #5

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[ WHIMPERS ]

COME TAKE A LOOK

AT THIS GUY.

[ SIGHS ]

ANY MENTION OF WHAT VEHICLE

HE'D BE DRIVING?

NO, HE JUST TELLS HER TO POS WHAT ROOM SHE'S IN ONLINE.

UNITS AREN' IN POSITION YET.

I CAN'T MAKE OU HIS TAGS.

THIS COULD BE HIM.

HE'S NERVOUS.

DOES THAT SURPRISE YOU?

OUR KILLER IS CONFIDENT.

THIS GUY IS NOT.

YEAH, WELL, HE'S GUILTY

OF SOMETHING.

CALL THE FRONT DESK

AND SEE IF SOMEONE

JUST CALLED IN FOR 115.

[ CELLPHONE BEEPING ]

[ Ringing ]

COME ON...

THEY'RE NOT ANSWERING.

WHAT'S HE UP TO?

[ ENGINE TURNS OVER ]

SON OF A B*TCH! LET'S GO.

SOMETHING'S SCREWED UP HERE.

[ TIRES SQUEAL ]

ALL SURVEILLANCE UNITS

EN ROUTE TO OUR LOCATION,

RED CHEVY BLAZER

HAS JUST LEFT --

IS A POSSIBLE SUSPECT.

WHITE MALE, MID 30s,

HEADING SOUTH ON ROUTE 40.

WHERE'D HE GO?

I HAVE NO IDEA.

LET'S TAKE THIS LEFT.

ALL RIGHT.

LET'S TAKE A RIGH INTO THIS GAS STATION COMING UP.

COULD BE BEHIND:

THE GAS STATION.

LET'S GO RIGH RIGHT HERE.

OKAY. SLOW DOWN. WHERE IS HE?

WHERE'D THE SON OF A B*TCH GO?

CHECK THE RIGHT HERE.

WHERE IS HE? WHERE IS HE?

WHERE IS HE?

WHAT THE F***?

THAT'S HIM.

THERE HE IS.

WHAT THE --

ALL RIGHT,

LET'S GET HIS TAG.

KEEP YOUR DISTANCE.

DON'T FREAK HIM.

[ STATIC CRACKLES ]

OKAY, CAN WE RUN THIS PLATE?

NEW JERSEY PLATE...

WHAT THE HELL IS HE DOING?

...ZHB-52M.

OKAY, LET'S NO SPOOK HIM.

MAN:
Unit 914, tag returns

John Davis on a '96 Blazer.

[ STATIC CRACKLES ]

ALL SURVEILLANCE UNITS,

LOOKS LIKE WE'RE HEADING BACK

NORTHBOUND ON ROUTE 40.

HEADING BACK NORTHBOUND

ON ROUTE 40.

[ STATIC CRACKLES ]

Unit 914, tag returns

no wants, no warrants.

[ STATIC CRACKLES ]

COPY THAT.

OKAY, HE'S PARKING IT UP.

HOLD BACK. HOLD BACK.

OH, JESUS.

OH, DEAR GOD.

[ CHUCKLES ]

[ CHUCKLES ]

YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME.

YOU'RE THE SHEEP,

AND I'M THE WOLF.

MAKES US PERFEC FOR ONE ANOTHER.

SHEEP NOURISHES THE FAMILY.

THE WOLF PROTECTS IT.

YEAH, BUT YOU'RE NO PROTECTING US RIGHT NOW.

YOU'RE PUTTING US

IN DANGER.

YEAH, BUT I'M GONNA

FIX IT.

[ INHALES DEEPLY ]

[ EXHALES DEEPLY ]

BABY...

DON'T DO THIS.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU, TOO.

THAT'S WHY

I GOT TO DO IT.

STOP IT!

[ MUFFLED SCREAMING ]

STOP IT RIGHT NOW!

RICHARD, SHE CAN'T BREATHE!

STOP IT, OR I'M LEAVING,

AND I'M NEVER COMING BACK!

STOP IT!

YOU CAN NEVER LEAVE ME.

THEN YOU BETTER:

START LISTENING TO ME.

ALL I WANT TO DO

IS FIX THIS, BABY.

OKAY, OKAY,

BUT THAT STARTS:

BY US MAKING:

GOOD DECISIONS TOGETHER.

THIS IS WHAT YOU WANT?

YEAH.

OKAY.

BUT I NEED YOU:

TO MAKE ME A PROMISE.

ANYTHING.

WHEN THEY COME FOR ME,

AND THEY WILL COME...

I WANT YOU TO KILL ME.

WHAT?

YEAH.

I WANT YOU TO TAKE MY GUN,

PLACE IT AGAINST MY TEMPLE,

AND BLOW:

MY F***ING BRAINS OUT.

YOU'RE CRAZY.

WHY WOULD YOU SAY

SOMETHING LIKE THAT?

BECAUSE THE LAST THING

I WANT TO SEE IN THIS WORLD...

IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL SMILE.

YOU'RE BEING INSANE.

[ PANTING ]

I AM TRYING TO:

HOLD IT TOGETHER HERE,

BUT I...I CAN'T.

I'M LOSING MY MIND,

AND YOU ARE OUT OF CONTROL.

LOOK, SAM,

JUST CALM DOWN, OKAY?

DON'T YOU TELL ME

TO CALM DOWN!

YOU WANT TO SEE:

A SHEEP BECOME A WOLF?

TELL ME:

TO CALM DOWN AGAIN.

BABY, ALL I'M TRYING

TO SAY --

DON'T YOU "BABY" ME.

I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TRYING

TO PULL HERE.

I KNOW:

WHAT YOU'RE DOING.

I'M NOT TRYING

TO PULL ANYTHING.

OH, WE LET HER GO,

AND I END UP KILLING YOU?

ARE YOU SERIOUS?

YOU'RE DAMN RIGH I'M SERIOUS.

OH, JUST WHEN I THINK

YOU CAN'T PUSH ME

ANY FURTHER OVER THE EDGE --

BAM! -- YOU SOMEHOW MANAGE.

WELL, I'M NOT GOING

TO PRISON,

AND I'M NOT PUTTING

YOU AND THE KIDS THROUGH A TRIAL

AND THE MEDIA FRENZY

THAT FOLLOWS.

DON'T YOU DO THAT.

DON'T YOU DARE PULL

OUR KIDS INTO THIS,

YOU SELFISH BASTARD.

I'M TRYING TO BE UNSELFISH.

WHAT I'M SAYING TO YOU

IS I'D RATHER DIE

THAN PUT YOU THROUGH HELL.

THERE IS NO ONE PART OF THIS SCENARIO

THAT DOESN' PUT US THROUGH HELL.

DON'T YOU SEE THAT?

YES, THERE IS.

YOU'RE THE ONE

THAT'S NOT SEEING IT.

OH, YEAH.

YEAH, I'M SORRY.

I-I FORGOT.

THERE'S THAT ONE SCENARIO

WHERE YOU KILL AN INNOCENT GIRL

IN OUR GARAGE:

AND RUN HER BODY

THROUGH A WOOD CHIPPER!

THERE AIN'T ONE ASPEC OF THAT B*TCH THAT IS INNOCENT.

ARE ANY OF US:

REALLY INNOCENT, RICHARD?

YEAH, MY KIDS ARE.

AND THEY DON'T DESERVE

TO PAY FOR MY MISTAKES.

THEY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY.

THEY DESERVE TO HAVE A CHANCE

AT A HAPPY LIFE.

AND THEY WILL HAVE ONE.

NOT IF SHE GOES TO THE COPS.

SHE WON'T.

[ CHUCKLES ]

GET THIS THROUGH

YOUR THICK SKULL --

SHE DIES HERE TONIGHT!

[ KNOCK ON DOOR ]

[ KNOCKS ON DOOR ]

THERE'S A COP

AT THE DOOR.

[ SIGHS ]

BABY,

WHAT ARE WE GONNA DO?

ALL RIGHT, JUST RELAX.

[ SIGHS ]

WHAT ARE THEY DOING HERE?

ARE YOU SURE SOMEBODY

DIDN'T SEE YOU PICK HER UP?

NO ONE SAW ME DO ANYTHING.

HOW CAN YOU BE SO SURE?

WHAT DO THEY WANT?

IT'S 9:
00 ON A FRIDAY NIGHT.

CRAZY MR. HARRIS

CALLED ME THIS WEEK,

AND HE SAID HE WAS

REQUESTING EXTRA PATROLS.

SOMETHING ABOUT VANDALISMS

OR SOMETHING. I DON'T KNOW.

I'M SURE THEY'RE JUST HERE

TO ASK SOME QUESTIONS.

HOW DO YOU KNOW:

THEY'RE NOT HERE FOR YOU?

BECAUSE IF THEY WERE

HERE FOR ME,

THEY WOULDN'T KNOCK ON THE DOOR

WITH ONE GUY.

THEY'D KNOCK DOWN THE DOOR

WITH 10.

[ KNOCK ON DOOR ]

JUST GO WAI IN THE BEDROOM, OKAY?

I'LL HANDLE IT.

HELLO, CAPTAIN,

THIS IS MAYFIELD.

I'VE BEEN TRYING TO REACH YOU.

WATCH COMMANDER:

WILL NOT APPROVE OVERTIME

WITHOUT YOUR PERSONAL OKAY.

PLEASE GIVE ME A CALL

WHEN YOU CAN.

THANK YOU. BYE-BYE.

[ CELLPHONE RINGS ]

[ CELLPHONE BEEPS ]

YEAH?

NO. NOTHING.

SHE'S BEEN IN THAT CHAT ROOM

THAT SHE MET HIM IN.

POSTED A FEW MESSAGES,

BUT THE ONLY HITS HAVE COME FROM

REGULARS BACK IN PHILLY.

THAT'S STRANGE.

WHAT TIME WAS HE SUPPOSED TO

PICK HER UP?

NEVER GAVE AN EXACT TIME.

JUST SAID SOME POIN AFTER 7:00.

LISTEN,

I'M GONNA RUN THESE TAGS

AND CROSS-REFERENCE THEM

WITH THE DATABASE.

Well, then let's have her

post something

saying she's

tired of waiting,

and she's going back to Philly

if he doesn't come soon.

YEAH -- I THINK SHE'S GONNA

START TO DETOX SOON,

SO IF WE DON'T ACT QUICKLY,

SHE'S GONNA NEED ANOTHER FIX.

We might never get

another shot like this.

We got to do everything we can

to motivate him to show.

AND WHAT IF:

HE DOESN'T SHOW?

LET'S JUST PRAY HE DOES.

[ CELLPHONE BEEPS ]

[ INDISTINCT CONVERSATION ]

[ LOCK ENGAGES ]

[ SIGHS ] IS IT OVER?

CAN I --

Shh!

[ SIGHS ]

SO, I KNOW YOU'RE TIRED

AND UNCOMFORTABLE,

BUT HANG IN THERE, OKAY?

WE'RE GETTING CLOSE

TO GETTING YOU OUT OF THERE.

TELL ME ABOUT YOUR SON.

HE'S 3.

HE'S A GOOD BOY.

HE SMILES ALL THE TIME.

WHAT'S HIS NAME?

JOHN TYLER.

NAMED AFTER:

YOUR FATHER, RIGHT?

HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?

MM, IT'S A STRONG NAME.

I JUST FIGURED IT HAD TO COME

FROM SOMEONE YOU LOVED.

[ CLEARS THROAT ]

MY DAD DIED, UM,

WHEN I WAS 9.

[ SIGHS ]

I LOVED HIM A LOT.

YEAH, I BET YOU DID.

[ CHUCKLES NERVOUSLY ]

WAS HIS PASSING THE REASON

THAT YOU'RE HERE?

YEAH.

MY MOM BECAME ABSENT.

I BECAME REBELLIOUS.

I TRIED HEROIN WITH MY BOYFRIEND

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