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So, the park ranger's telling the truth?

Old Phil? Man, he's more chicken-sh*t

than the rest of 'em.

Well, I heard this little girl, like screaming...

"Where is my Mommy?"

I swear...

No sh*t?

Yeah.

Yeah, some people say that some weird

sh*t did happen back in the day.

Who says that, and what happened?

They say a guy living in the woods...

kept his daughter locked up in the house.

Never let her leave.

He ??shot his wife and daughter.

Blah, blah.

Blah blah blah...

Then he set the house on fire,

murder suicide.

Some people say the wife killed the family,

it just depends on which story you hear.

How long ago was this?

- Ten years...

And the little girl's spirit

still roams the woods! Woooo!

Up until 10 years ago, the area was

a popular camping and hunting area,

and it's the kind of tall tale that

keeps people from poking around.

That's why we're here!

- Oh...

Don't want nobody stumbling

upon our magic garden.

Boo!

Does this scare you?

No, it's a toy doll.

Yeah, we have her just in case, uh...

we run into unwelcome visitors.

Her name's Britney.

Hi.

Well, what I saw was real.

And it scared the sh*t out of me.

I guess...

a lot of people feel the same way.

You guys don't believe me.

Well, we've never seen or heard a ghost-girl,

and we've been up here a while.

It's gettin' late,

I gotta go.

But thank you so much for...

- Oh...

You should spend the night!

- No, I've already put you guys out too much.

We have an extra sleeping bag.

Yes, it's totally cool.

No! It's no bother.

We like nice people.

Who wants to spend the evening alone?

Well, I wouldn't recommend it.

I mean, you lose the sunlight and get lost,

there's no telling where you'll end up.

See, just spend the night here with us, and

we'll help you get back in the morning.

Yeah...

- Hmm?

Okay, sure.

Mm, all rightie...

- All right...

We need to, uh... we need to, uh...

Food! Make food!

Yeah, we're gonna make

some food in a bit and, um...

Hungry?

Where's Mommy?

They're coming to get me!

I see the mean mans,

they will hurt me.

I- I'm scared.

Judy? Judy...

Did you hear that?

Wha- what is it?

I heard the voices.

Sal!

Stop with the practical jokes!

Don't scare our guest!

You're all right, it was just a bad dream.

...and I'm gaining experience,

and soon, level 38 here I come.

The whole, you know...

Hey!

What the hell are you doing here?

We're having breakfast, silly!

You want some?

You got Brad?

Hi Stacy.

Kell, I told you I wanted to be alone.

Hi babe.

Why are you all here?

We were worried about you.

Yeah.

I couldn't sleep until I knew you were okay.

Okay, no offense, um...

I'd like you all to leave, please.

Come on, you don't mean that.

Come on,

we came all the way up here to see you.

I wouldn't be here if I...

didn't care about you.

Chris!

- Sh*t! I'm sorry.

Let me help you with that.

- Thank you, Brad.

Stacy, are you okay?

Yeah.

Oh my God, what happened?

Stacy?

There you go, detective.

- Thank you.

That was some fire.

Hey Sheriff, how are you?

Hey, look at this.

There's a tricycle in the rubble.

- I have two detectives from Beaumont.

Well, they're lookin' at the photos from the Gillis burn site.

- I don't believe this.

Oh.

Okay. Yeah.

Yes, Sheriff.

Sorry detectives, I'm gonna

have to take these photos back.

Why?

- Sheriff's orders.

You would think they'd have

cleaned this place up by now.

Police has covered this area many times, Black.

What do you expect to find now?

I'm not sure.

Then why are we here?

Just thirty-five years of experience.

Find anything?

Huh!

That's odd.

Somewhat fresh.

Oh Christ!

What'd you find?

We gotta get the sheriff up here.

Trace, are you all right?

I'm fine.

It's over, Brad, okay?

Leave.

No...

I know you don't mean it.

No, there's nothing you can say, nothing...

that you can do.

Just please leave me alone.

Just listen to me, Stacy. Okay?

To what? More of your bullshit lies?

Your promises?

Come on, don't...

don't do this to me, okay?

Don't...

don't do this to us.

There is no more us, okay?

Just... please...

Just move on, okay?

Let's just... talk when you...

you've settled down, okay?

You know we're meant to be.

Mommy...

Okay...

I'll leave.

You win.

But before I go, just answer

this question honestly. Okay?

Do you still love me?

I do...

and I can't love you anymore.

Because love is not about feeling worthless.

That's how you make me feel.

No, no...

it's not gonna work.

Why do you have to be so difficult?

It's over, Brad.

After everything I've done for you?

Please...

You just wanted a free

ride, didn't you, huh?

Go...

Why do you hurt me so?

Leave me alone, please.

I know you still love me.

- No!

No Brad!

You're mine,

you always will be mine.

I found you, Mommy.

Please, leave me alone.

I know you still love me.

Kill him, Mommy.

Wait... my head...

I heard voices.

What?

Kill him, Mommy.

Do you hear that?

- What's the matter with you, huh?

The place is haunted...

Haunted? Huh?

Don't be f***in' stupid!

Stacy?

What is going on? Stacy?

Oh my god! Stacy, wake up! Wake up!

Chris!

Stacy, wake up, wake up, wake up.

Oh my god...

What?

You're not going to hurt Mommy,

any more.

Quit f***in' around, guys!

Why do you hurt Mommy?

You're not going to hurt Mommy,

any more.

You are a bad

Dad.

Here...

I'm going out of my mind.

That bastard's gonna pay for what he did.

The f***er's dead.

I just keep hearing noises,

it's like I'm going insane.

What is it? What kind of

noises are you hearing?

I just keep hearing this...

this little girl calling out to

me, like... like I'm her mother.

I'm sorry, you were being serious.

What's happening?

It's just stress, baby, okay?

With Brad and all the other

crazy stuff that's going on...

well, stress can drive you crazy.

You were right to come up here.

You just... need a little peace and quiet.

How am I supposed to get

peace and quiet when I just

keep hearing this crazy kid

every two seconds?

Okay, you know what?

Mama Kelly is on the job.

What?

Yep! You need to get some sleep.

Come on, get under.

Now, just sleep.

Okay?

Kill him, Mommy.

He has been bad!

It's okay...

It's okay, calm down.

Calm down, it's not your fault. You were

just dreaming. You were just dreaming.

Okay?

Lay back down.

You're just dreaming.

Okay?

Just calm down.

I can't believe we didn't find this before.

I want you two to be quiet about this.

But Sheriff...

- We are gonna do this my way,

and I don't want a panic on our hands.

Now, you two do your normal rounds tonight,

but if you see any more of

this crazy sh*t, you call me.

All right, sure thing Sheriff.

I saw you!

Come back here!

What's wrong?

I saw... I saw the little girl.

We gotta, we gotta go...

- Wait! Where are you going?

What are you guys...

what are you doing?

Stacy, hold on!

Come on, she went

over here, I think.

Okay...

Sure, we'll follow her this way.

Stacy, I thought you told Brad to leave.

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