Visible Scars Page #6

Synopsis: Seventeen years ago, Mike Gillis killed a new mother of twin girls and took the babies to a house in the woods, claiming them as his own to appease his wife's desire for kids. After Mike committed multiple murders over seven years to "protect" the growing girls locked in the basement, even finally killing his wife, one day a fire in the house causes it to collapse on Mike and the twins. In present day, Stacy Walker flees to her uncle's old secluded cabin in those same woods to escape her abusive boyfriend. Once there, her head begins to clear and she feels free to be with her thoughts. That first night she is haunted by the ghosts of the little girls crying for their mother. Meanwhile, Detective Black is investigating the 17-year-old case of the twins' disappearance and their mother's murder. The cold trail suddenly turns warm when the case leads to the same secluded mountainous region where Stacy has escaped. As Stacy is beginning to figure out her life, as well as trying to unravel t
Genre: Thriller
Director(s): Richard Turke
  1 win & 4 nominations.
 
IMDB:
3.4
NOT RATED
Year:
2012
102 min
10 Views


I did.

Okay, well that explains it. He was the one

that knocked on the... on the window.

So, can we please go inside now?

It wasn't him.

It was a girl.

Yeah.

Come on, let's...

I mean, I know she's here.

Can we just look a

little further, please?

Yeah, that's a good idea.

Let's just go deeper in the woods, Kell.

Oh Chris, come on.

Really?

This is a good idea. This

is a really good idea.

Ass!

Where were you?

Oh, just messing around.

It still looks fake.

Really?

Some people don't think so.

I happen to think it looks

pretty f***in' good.

The doll's fine, just don't mess

around with it.

Hey, I need a break.

Can you take over?

Yeah.

Now you stay here...

while I do this! Huh!

Why are we the only

ones out here now?

You got me.

What is all this stuff?

Looks like some sort of campsite.

Campsite...

Yeah...

Aw, man, there's some weird stuff here,

Kent.

Jim, careful!

Oh my god!

Jesus!

Sal?

Sal?

Sal?

Sal?

Sal?

Where are you?

Sal?

Sal?

Is that...

Is that you?

Oh, do you sm-

What is that smell?

That's nasty.

Oh my god.

- What is this?

Chris, we don't have Stacy!

- What do you want me to do?

What do you mean? What do we... we're in

the middle of the woods, we don't have...

Shh! Quiet down!

We need to leave, okay?

We need to get out of here.

This... is not...

This is not... No, no.

We need to go.

Stacy?

Sh*t!

Now we can't f***in' see, Chris!

I told you to...

Babe?

Do you hear that?

Babe, is that...?

Stace?

- Would you stop dragging me, I can't see.

Stacy?

- I think I got... wait...

Babe...

- There we go.

Oh my god!

Oh god!

Oh my god.

Stacy, no.

Don't look.

Ah, Wendy?

Well, what is it?

Did you see something?

No.

Are you okay?

- Yeah.

When are you leavin'?

Uh... soon.

I wanna go check on a girl and her

boyfriend at the Dovic cabin.

Hold on, I got another call.

Hello?

- Hey girl.

Hey.

Oh my God, whoa, whoa, whoa... what happened?

- Help! Please!

Someone killed my boyfriend!

W- Wendy! Wendy, we

need help up here!

It's okay. Okay.

You know, I'm just

waiting on Phil.

Yeah.

Wendy!

He's always looking for somethin'.

Mm-hmm, yeah...

What the hell... f***!

I know...

Hold on a second.

Hey, did you leave yet?

We're not going to wait forever.

Are you there?

Phil?

Phil!

Can we just... can we just stop for a second?

Where the f*** are we going?

I don't know, okay?

I think we're lost.

Great.

Chris, run!

- No. We gotta analyze this,

this is not gonna work!

Oh sweet J...

Phil!

No...

Chris, I don't care. Just go knock on the door

and see if they can help us.

Hippies. The hippies live here.

The what?

Oh great, this is fantastic.

A buncha stoners are

gonna help us out.

Now, what're we gonna do?

I don't know how to get back.

- We need to get the hell out of here, okay?

Your friend is just... losing it.

Hug...

Hold me.

Hug.

What has happened?

What happened?

What did you see?

Is anybody in there?

Babe, are you okay?

Okay. Chris, she is going into shock.

We gotta get out of here.

I get it. Hello?

- Okay, take a deep breath...

Deep breath, okay?

Stacy, what did you see?

Little girl.

See who?

Little girl? I didn't see a

little girl, it's an empty house!

Stacy, there's no little girl.

There's nobody in there Kell, there's nobody in there.

She's flippin' out, look...

Okay. Stop yelling at us!

I'm sorry, I'm just... y' know, your

friend has obviously checked out here.

Look, there's a...

there's a phone at the house.

We're gonna call the police, all right?

- Let's get out of here, this is freaking me out.

Let's go, come on, come on.

- Do you think this is the right way?

We're closed.

I'm a detective, I'd like

to ask you a few questions.

How can I help ya'?

Thanks for lettin' me in, I

know it's after closin' time,

but I won't take too much of your time.

I'm Detective Black from Beaumont,

and I'm investigating the disappearance

of a woman and her two daughters.

You wouldn't happen to know

a Mike Gillis, would you?

Oh, Mike Gillis, that son of a b*tch?

Well, I've asked around about him,

and nobody seems to know about him.

Even the sheriff doesn't know about it.

Oh, he knows.

Everybody knows.

They just don't want to talk about it.

I knew his wife, too.

His wife?

Yeah, she used to come

in here all the time.

Make those strange purchases...

I knew she wasn't pregnant.

What strange purchases?

Well, like two of everything!

Two bottles, two sets of clothes...

Like for twins.

I remember her distinctly.

She was a kind of a homely girl, but

extremely polite.

And then she stopped coming in.

Soon after that, he was gone.

Can you tell me anything

more about this Mike Gillis?

Well, not too much, he was kinda

closed-mouthed and kept to himself.

Except when his house burnt down...

then he was the talk of the town,

but for all the wrong reasons.

When Claudia disappeared...

he went up in the mountains

and never came to town again.

Well, some people thought he

might've murdered Claudia.

If you knew all of this...

why didn't you call the authorities?

Well, I just didn't want

to get too involved...

Murray, Murray! We got a problem!

I need ammo.

What is it?

Hey Murray, we need ammo!

- What about the sheriff?

Screw the Sheriff!

Who is that?

That's that Detective Black

from Beaumont.

Murray, I'm in a hurry!

All right, all right!

Murray! We got a

murder on our hands!

A murder?

Who?

We don't know, it

looks like a visitor.

Phil's dead, too.

Phil Brady?

Phil mentioned something about a girl and her

boyfriend staying up at the Dovic house.

How far is this Dovic house?

They're miles up the Truancy's mountain.

But you say the police are on their way.

Yeah, but it's gonna take 'em a

while, they're in another county.

Then the four of us will go to

the Dovic house.

Murray, don't tell anybody!

I won't.

I mean it!

I swear!

- Hello?

- Hello, Martha?

Is that you?

Chris!

I told you this was a bad idea.

Wait for me! Jesus!

Okay, Chris. You need to lock all the doors and stuff.

I'm taking Stacy into the bedroom, okay?

All right, yeah. I gotta call 911,

we gotta get the f*** out of here!

Jeez, f***!

Okay, all right...

okay.

You f***ing piece of

sh*t, come on, come on.

There's no dial tone.

There's no dial tone!

You don't understand.

I didn't mean to kill her.

I didn't...

- Who?

I wanted children, but I...

I didn't mean any... he made me!

She woulda' been fine...

What are you talking about?

Kelly, where's Brad?

Okay. Everything's

gonna be okay, okay?

We're gonna get you to the doctor, okay?

Stacy, did you leave

the window open?

Who's there?

Mommy?

I'm not afraid of you!

Stop!

Stop messing with my mind!

Mommy...

Show yourself...

No!

Mommy?

I see you've got your rag-doll.

Where are you going, Mommy?

Why are you trying to take Mommy away?

Where are you taking Mommy?

Mommy, the bad man's gonna hurt you too?

We won't let him hurt you anymore.

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